Electrobel

good song! squarepush-style funk!
ow yeah...

i like yer ideas/melodys alot.but the beats should have a point that they start flowing and not breaks after break.that's why i like the beat on the end so much it has a flow and thats what i miss a little bit in the beginning.i know you like the clean sounds but it reminds a bit of the eighties tracks made on synclav(one of the first sequencers with build in sounds and no velocities :) ) by frank zappa but in those days there was nothing better so i guess start experimenting with sound is my advice.open new tracks and experiment yer ass off export them as wave and re import them in yer song you want to finnish and cut them up with the reason samplers.greets and good inspiration

I hear development!!!! But agree with icteder ;) oink oink, may the forces of good music be with you! oh and, the climax could use, a little bit more climax

very original melodies !! the sound of the bass isn't great though ( a bit too much reverb or sum'? ) and im not starting about the beat . icteder is more of an expert in that field :) good song though, like th epart after the cut at 2.30

i personally think this i your best song , a lot of interesting melodies in it. but comments above apply: fix your drums, use more original samples in it, that could do a lot and make it a great song.

thx for the comments
to quioui, i put a lot of work in the melodies imo a better melodical song of me yes indeed
anyway, not going 2 rework this one, ^^ now i cant but ! soon i will mmh, perhaps some day ^^