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klootviool - "RAW"

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tried too make some dnb but didnt went so well ,anyway i'd like too hear some comments so that i know what other ppl think of this the ending is jus something i made too have an ending song's still under construction :) have fun listening

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Anonymous [be] - 17 years ago

sounds like original fruity samples.
try to make like kick kick snare kick snare :p
adjust yor speed to at least 170 bpm to make it sound faster , that should get you a bit further ;)
grts
 

crolerbedo [be] - 17 years ago

yeah work on sounds, it's too artificial.Now your idea seems original, some acid-like drum, so try to make it that way, with an acid line and strange sounds, get mad on the drums :))
 

brainsucked [be] - 17 years ago

what can i say about that???
 

CruizeOfFiction [be] - 17 years ago

Your drums are bad (throwing all that percussion in between isn't all that either) structure is ok, but even choise of sound isn't great either.

Off course for a first dnb song its "allright". Try to listen to the genre of dnb in which you want tp develop yourself, get insperation, pay attention on hwo they make the beats. Then try and give it a personal twist. Get inspired my friend!

keep up
 
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