Electrobel

great progression throughout the song.
nice. great melody.

i'm not a fan of the crash/cymbal sound @ 0:50 though.

Yea... nice track mate! Like the story througout the track... Structure is nice allready :) Tells a story this track.. Dreamy, tad dark.... 's Reallly good imo... Not to sure bout the category, but wouldn't directly know where to put it either... Enjoyed it 4 sure! Keep 'm comming pls :) grtz

nice trivia and interesting noises and rythm. thought about long female soprano voice as background in the middle of the track before hardcore guitar :) looking forward to experiencing your coming track :)

jiere

great potential! great music!
Please don't stop!

elteekay

Man, you've got a really cool vibe here, sounds and compo are great but your voice sounds a
bit "light", it should sound more concrete, see ?? maybe some disto/flanger on it ?

great fuckin atmo and good structure
your voice isn't that bad I think ;)

Nice track man ! Like it !!! :)

I love this one
very nice melodies and the vocal is superb !
nice deep atmo en a lot of sounds
very great track buddie

thumbs up & HD

Wow! Really nicely finished man!! Sound's awesome... Your voice/vocal is good!! (Is it possible that your backgroundpad or synth is somewhat on the back and less audible? Or are my ears (or headphones) deceiving me? :-) ) Pro track man, a couple more of these and you can start thinking about a little album also :) Excellent listening!!..Grtz!

i like it though, i listen again and again..

kai
bangkok

Sterke plaat!
I like the voice too, not that you're an excellent singer but it sounds genuine and directly from the heart. And you manage to put some sincere emotion in your vocals which to me is also important.

The continuation and the build are good, actually this track reminds me of kaoz' work here on ebel, his songs are also often less melody-based but rather thrive on emotion and atmosphere.
You've used some very nice sounds and pads, I really like the moodsetting of the song. Good job Vuurkikker!

Do you wanna post the lyrics?

yeeah my friend good son . I liked dark atmospheir and lyriks ... cool!

the voice is too weak - change that and its a great song !

nice ambiance !!! totaly diffrent than usualy !!! realy good ! nice mastering !

Hey! this Xavier from Hong Kong, just wanna say that u have a good talents !! nice song u made! cool!!

Hugs
Xav,xx

yep

pure ambient song !

I liked the melody and flow. I'd like to hear vocal version too