Electrobel

Well this one and Eplamonu already sound a lot better than mmmmelk.
I really like the synths you use in this one here, good choice.
But it still needs a lot of work of course. Put more bass in the background, a decent bassline for starters. Also your mix and soundquality could have some more depth. Not sure if you are already at the point of mastering but you should get into it definitely. Also should you try to bring more balance to your soundspectrum. One moment it's fine, the next it's all drowned out by one element.
Another thing, pleeeeeeease drop those standard claps from your soundbank. Use snares instead. If there's anything that gets on my system it's those horribly annoying standard claps.
I appreciate your will to try, but you still got a long way to go my friend. I hope you see the constructiveness of my comments, we're only here to help eachother out.