Electrobel

i must say i like the violin in it but sometimes i hear some death parts i mean that it moddert maar wat aan. It doesn't go somewhere in my opinion. Certainly there are good parts in it but the guitar is sometimes a little 'vals'. so short resumé: good but need some extra work. but you got my thumb up for originality ;)

I Like it. I think the melo's are just fine. Sometimes 'wrong' notes create an interesting tension. Nice 'n melancholic. Maybe it lasts a bit too long though. And you can try to get some punch into that snare. Other than that, good track! I hear you changed the bass in the end in this version. problem solved. Grtz

Thanks both,
I struggled with some doubts about the death parts and the track lasting to long, now i know for sure that im gonna change some things...
grts!