Electrobel

Hey nephew... you should lower your volumes a lilttle bit... and maybe flatten the whole thing a little bit. For your first track its really not bad at all.

... and the psycho ending is just amazing.

welkom........nice first track..... :))

Good to ear the first steps of a newbie.
Keep on the good work.
n(-ù-)°

take ur time, experiment alot, as much as possible, try everything/every software/sounds u can find...
just never stop creating, enhancing urself, crossing your own borders...
ull get there some day ;)
ending is cool idd, keep up

Thank you for your comments,that's for me at the moment the only way how Ican learn something....so thank you verry much.
I've alreadymade a 2nd version with the verry creative name THE BEGINNING Version 2
I'll upload it during the next two days.

Words of wisdom from akwalek!!!

As he says: Now keep working on it, trying, trying, trying, deleting, changing... and dont forget variating. Jump the barriers in your head.

One very personal advice: Less is mostly more!

I'd have to agree with liquidbass on the volumes! the sounds sound distorted!

i'm not sure what you used to create this song, but if you want to distort your sounds, there is plenty of good software outthere to do that! My fave is Scream in Reason, it's just awesome!

Keep creating/trying buttons even tho you dont know what they mean or do/experimenting/etc...

Peace!
Oz