Electrobel

I am not keen on negative comments but in a good way i can hold my tears, so would it be to much to ask for if you give a bad recommandation to explain why so i can improve ... tnx

not really into hardcore myself but i heard my share of hardcore tunes @ friends places so ill try to give you a comment
I actually enjoyed the track, which doesnt happen alot for me with hc
some advice..
the snare is too sharp, try & eq it some more, or just use a different sample
I liked the first part best, especially the bass.. and that melody is catchy as hell
Could benefit from some more variation (short breaks, fx usage etc) ..
Second part is a bit too crazy for me but im sure for hardcore lovers that wont be an issue^^
structure was good & sound decent

This is not the right forum to get decent comments on hardcore tunes imo, so dont take the lack of them too serious :)
good stuff for one of first songs
cheerio