Electrobel

i miss some serious dheepness to be fully enjoyable, but yur almost there

your main snare has to be louder.
and I would put more different elements and/or variations of elements,you know.
just try al of this and experiment a lot!
cheerz

Whaw, now this is a phatt hoover!

Thumbs up!

The first part seems to be a bit loud, then it breaks loose there's suddenly a massive increase in sound. So check that again, or let it gradually increase, but not so suddenly.

Bass ain't as deep as in your other track, missing a bit of depth indeed just as Akwa already mentioned. At times it sounds a bit mono to me. Even though your sounds are well-spread over your spectrum, I think the contract between high and low frequencies should be bigger, particularly for the drums.

But taking into account you've only posted 2 songs yet I see lots of potential, so stay at it and keep digging!