Electrobel

First minute is very good => nice bass nice drums, the sound comin in at 1'08'' is not bad, but it should be used to build up in my opinion not as a lead sound, same with the sound comin in at 2'56'' they take away the power of the song, which is the clean bassdrop and the drums...
I like the drum build up 'round 2'30'' a lot, but then you don't use that to drop or break, the same repetitive guitar sound comes in
Besides them 2 sounds, it's a very FAT track!
cheers Wickzzz

Thx for the pointers Wickzzz, first steps in dupstep, so I need them.

hearing by this sound, I wouldn't have noticed it's your first steps!
maybe also bring in a new bass, something deep or something vettig... a la phollox