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Tjahzi - pala bam
Description
started this song in september,but after a while working on, it i got tired the song and lost track of it.
discovered it again in the deep caves of my harddisk and now after a longtime i think i nearly finished, and i'd like to hear some opinions!
I'm planning to put lyrics on the song later on but the text isn't finished quite yet.
started with the idea to create an
impression of a day in september, i can say it was a high month verdikkeme ! enjoy
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Comments
HarryPoppins [be] - 16 years ago
i like the lofi beat :)
HyeVolture [be] - 16 years ago
CruizeOfFiction [be] - 16 years ago
tho imo it could use a tad more variation..
and the there is to much crackle on the bass (acording to me ofcourse)
I recognised the melo (you prolly let me hear it a while back^^) it deff got a shitload of potential, maybe EQ your breaks more and try to add an extra element (higher frequenced) with a tad of delay?
just sugestions:)
anywyas deff thumb up essé
creatic [be] - 16 years ago
About the lyrics: I suggest a soft female voice on it.
adya [be] - 16 years ago
was thinking for the lyrics a little soft bunch of laid back rhymes, considered aswel a soft woman voice. i'll try both and see what works out best
teebo [be] - 16 years ago
Bass is also very nice
+fav
eeezzeepeezzeee [be] - 16 years ago
Skip [be] - 16 years ago
saved it.
enjoyed it!
Luv the harmony of elements and the simple beat fits perfectly....nothing else to add.
eckhart [be] - 16 years ago
particle [be] - 16 years ago
i like the melo's and the atmosphere as mentioned very layback and good work on the rythmics too, i especially like 'em when they start rolling, goodie^^
keep em coming like this!
Anonymous [be] - 16 years ago
naar mijn gevoel is het vraag-antwoordspel van trompet iets te droog en simpel, zeker als het gedurende het hele lied een basis vormt. Als er nog meer gevoel in de trompet gestoken kon worden zou excellent zijn ( maar gaat niet via pc...)
Het begin zou ik misschien wat trager opbouwen
de climax in het midden zou mss nog langer mogen duren en nog meer shwoeng in, om dan weer plots in het vraag en antwoordspel te belanden van trompet...
nice!
kvain [be] - 16 years ago
grim [be] - 16 years ago
percussion sounds smooth.
nice evolution in the song, kinda feel like floating on a little happy cloud.
i'm curious how its would sound with the piano more to the front, but its also nice the way it is :)
+fav
adya [be] - 16 years ago
eckhart [be] - 16 years ago
omihoshbin [be] - 16 years ago
sweet melo.
i could see myself gazing slightly melancholic outside the window on this tune,
but in a good way then^^