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Tjahzi - pala bam

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started this song in september,
but after a while working on, it i got tired the song and lost track of it.
discovered it again in the deep caves of my harddisk and now after a longtime i think i nearly finished, and i'd like to hear some opinions!

I'm planning to put lyrics on the song later on but the text isn't finished quite yet.

started with the idea to create an
impression of a day in september, i can say it was a high month verdikkeme ! enjoy

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HarryPoppins [be] - 11 years ago

nice 1
i like the lofi beat :)
 

HyeVolture [be] - 11 years ago

nice atmo here! really chilly mood, indeed a kind of "end of summer"-feeling. good job!
 

CruizeOfFiction [be] - 11 years ago

realy nice, good use of sounds
tho imo it could use a tad more variation..
and the there is to much crackle on the bass (acording to me ofcourse)

I recognised the melo (you prolly let me hear it a while back^^) it deff got a shitload of potential, maybe EQ your breaks more and try to add an extra element (higher frequenced) with a tad of delay?

just sugestions:)

anywyas deff thumb up essé
 

creatic [be] - 11 years ago

sounds great. Has a melodramatic feel. It's a song that you listen to after a very heavy summer.
About the lyrics: I suggest a soft female voice on it.
 

adya [be] - 11 years ago

thanks for the tips!

was thinking for the lyrics a little soft bunch of laid back rhymes, considered aswel a soft woman voice. i'll try both and see what works out best
 

teebo [be] - 11 years ago

damn nice song with nice and sparkling beats, the song fits well in this beautifull evening. nice one, make it longer and add some more elements please
Bass is also very nice
+fav
 

eeezzeepeezzeee [be] - 11 years ago

good laid back song ya got there, I'd just ad a tad more evolution. :)
 

Skip [be] - 11 years ago

love this track, gives me the feeling everything is A -O.K.
saved it.
enjoyed it!

Luv the harmony of elements and the simple beat fits perfectly....nothing else to add.
 

eckhart [be] - 11 years ago

great laidback tune :) ++
 

particle [be] - 11 years ago

great! glad to see you worked further on this one :)
i like the melo's and the atmosphere as mentioned very layback and good work on the rythmics too, i especially like 'em when they start rolling, goodie^^
keep em coming like this!
 

Anonymous [be] - 11 years ago

ksta er nog steeds van versteld dat je met zo'n programma echt mooie nummers kan schrijven.
naar mijn gevoel is het vraag-antwoordspel van trompet iets te droog en simpel, zeker als het gedurende het hele lied een basis vormt. Als er nog meer gevoel in de trompet gestoken kon worden zou excellent zijn ( maar gaat niet via pc...)
Het begin zou ik misschien wat trager opbouwen
de climax in het midden zou mss nog langer mogen duren en nog meer shwoeng in, om dan weer plots in het vraag en antwoordspel te belanden van trompet...
nice!
 

kvain [be] - 11 years ago

yess yess, relaxing...mabe the sax needs to fade away earlier, so only the beat's going on for a while. good track overall!
 

grim [be] - 11 years ago

i like it, i think its ok without lyrics.
percussion sounds smooth.
nice evolution in the song, kinda feel like floating on a little happy cloud.
i'm curious how its would sound with the piano more to the front, but its also nice the way it is :)
+fav
 

adya [be] - 11 years ago

thanks :)
 

eckhart [be] - 11 years ago

stil verrrrry enjoyable :):)
 

omihoshbin [be] - 11 years ago

lovely beat.
sweet melo.
i could see myself gazing slightly melancholic outside the window on this tune,
but in a good way then^^
 
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