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Freethinker - robthastreet

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yeah , so it was an attempt at a short song ( only 5 mins this is the shortest i ever created :P)

so anyway i made it to get some comment on the entire build up and shit of my songs, i know it lacks a basic plan, that's why i'm asking your help :)

maybe also to much distortion?

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ZeBrokenEgg [fr] - 16 years ago

There is never too much distorstion, and you should increase the sound density, some parts are too simple, for example add some mad snares and synths. but it's a good beginning.
 

IskaRiot [be] - 16 years ago

what he ^ said, add some more elements in your breaks and more synths for a more complete feeling, you know, filling up some empty parts.
disto is good, like it harsh. and some structural elements are real good = thumb up
 
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