Electrobel

except for the title, i tought it was pretty guud man ... i would make the breaks a little less upfront or at least a little less compressed, but nevertheless thumb up on my account.

I was allmost gonna comment on the impro-achtige notes at 01:44-01:45...buuuut its nice feitlek.

cool those baselinezz....real close-my-eyes-nice kinda mood....somewhat a little bit strange mood....nice work.

I f I would change one thingy,t'would be euh....the snare you use in the beat section,I would use that snare for the 2/2 rythme,and Idd use another snare for the "inbetween" snare hits.ebdem?

I feel imrovement in "the force".
eu'goe bézech man.

hm I don't really get what you mean.
is it the snare that comes at 3:11 you would change? and, how should I change it then? cuz I agree dat er gelijk iets raars mee is

en lol "the force" :p thanx man
and elfenkommando too; I changed the title ; )

to explain simple;theres imo too much of that snare.

with 2/2 I mean ;2 snare hits per "loop"...

loving the intro, hmm idd diene snare klink nie krachtig genoeg imo,een beetje "cheap",ma bon das miereneuke,muggeziffte & kommabeffe.
dees lied is dé màx ze,tenzeerst van, genooten^^

vree schoontje

about the snare comments: agreed, but pff it just needs a bit of EQ-ing thats all...
I realy enjoyed this one a lot
thumb up!!

ps: I'd just go a bit more easy on the delay;)

I really love the melos..I agree with Skip on the snare thing but overal it's a very nice track

hmja, kben nogal een delay-addict ^^

en thank you schuune, glad you all enjoyed it

luv the cool feeling it spreads.. and the bouncing of your beats too.

damn, prachtig lied, very pro, beats vinnek vree goe, kmerk veel evolutie in samenhang van geluiden en subtiele dingen, er zou alleen eventueel ietsie pietsie meer vaart in mogen, maar verder: dijk van een lied dak ga donwloaden

nice composition!
the snare is idd a bit disturbing and the title is gay, but for the rest, great work!

lol "gay" : p
hmyea a bit maybe
first the title was "The sky was pink, orange, green and also een beetje violet"
but that was a bit lame;

sometimes a bit overkill on the delay's (don't leave a space for something else)// but the other 2 melo's r great & "dramatious" // nice "intro" for the SD's, although it last for allmost 2 minuts // they bring in a whole lota tension / pressure !! // but, this song is only an intro ; what falls out of the sky ? thatz what i want to know ... // this story must continue ; it's allmost a harry P book //

it's beautifull but i agree about the title and the song is too short
da nen opbouw peet!

hey, about the title, kvind em zeer goed gevonden.

nice, although i had the same feeling skip mentioned in some parts, besides that i really like your sounds and atmosphere you gave this track, it flows very smoothly but watch out with that delay on the notes, sometimes they don't correspond that well anymore, maybe use a filter delay? ma in ieder geval twas vrééd goe! :)

This song is wonderful.

Thank you!

sweet.
well the others have already pointed out that the snare sounds quite unfitting.
Really enjoyed that final part with the singing flute-synth.
As for build and structure this was different from your newer tracks because you didn't really have the song go heavier or harsher, actually I was really convinced it would evolve in such way again so I'm glad it didn't for a change.