Electrobel

Sounds filtered, too much in the middle i think, and thus it lacks punch, which you can't afford as this is a common dancing electro track, i mean it's not very original...
You got efficient sounds and melo, but should work to make it more personnal and punchy.
Keep going

Thank you for your comment. For the filter, i guess that you're talking about the pass band filter? Maybe u're right, i'll try a bit less. For the originality, honestly, i was quite proud of my transition: pass band filter -> pass high filter -> cuts of sounds -> and a new sound with glide. From me it's original because i didn't hear it a lot before.

When you say: "this is a common dancing electro track". Apart for the "common", i agree with you ;-) It was the aim of the track: dance.

One more time (as greats men said ;-) ), thank your for your reaction and if you want to complete your critic (about the originality for example), you are welcome.

'lectro ;-)

ok, I'll explain in pm, otherwise i'll overflood your comment page ;)