Electrobel

wow, thats hard!
the kick kills my ears :)
try to make more fluid sounds that will make your song better, then those short hit sounds thing, but still some cool parts and cool bass sometimes (osom style)
keep progressing ... , every song till now you hear you are progressing

Thanks for your comment Lapsus! I know my kick is a bit hard, but I prefer a too hard kick over an almost-non-audible kick anyday. And I try to make more liquid sounds, but as you say, with every attempt one can learn a lot of new things.