Electrobel

mmmhh very nice elements, nice delays, nice everything but god dam it i wanted to ear the floooOOooOOow, its very cutted and its missin a good flow imho. A punchy bass line and a nice flow and this will be a killer track...
I enjoyed the track man, big up !

solid

thx for the comments.

this a way better version than the one you sent me!!!!! i really like your beginning, cool riddim effect created by your beat. is has the potential to be a killa track, but your song should burst open around 1min30!!!! if you create a break around then, start your bassline and a 4/4 kick and beat and you'll have a massive pumping effect i think.
ps: it really sucks when people give you a thumb down without even commenting, it shows no respect, especially not towards a beginning producer! i don't care if a song has 10 downs, as long as there are 10 constructive comments with suggestions how to improve it.

annom is right, a guud zion train like flow, I can feel it underneath the surface, only needs to be unearthed.
snare could use a bit more delays and reverb to create more of a flow.
Could turn out splendid this one, keep it up!