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Tjahzi - inconspicuous men

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i've worked quite a while on it. it still isn't finished, i was hoping to get some constructive comments on this one (:

i tried to create a massive attack atmo. i think that worked out.

edit: added some minor thingy's, changed a few envelopes. left a few thingy's out. quite happy with the result now but i know the mix still ain't wonderfull. i wanted to sing but after a few hours of trying i bailed.

enjoy!

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liquidbass [be] - 11 years ago

nice
 

HyeVolture [be] - 11 years ago

really like the electric guitar, is something nice on ebel. cool dark atmosphere, would be cool with some harder drums instead of the trip hop approach, but I'm not a massive attack connaisseur. so personally I would make the drums less "wet", less reverbed and put more drums in it. but then again, if it is trip hop you want to create, I'm not the right person to give advice for this one. certainly thumb up, and I'm curious how this will end!
 

Omyiga [be] - 11 years ago

idd, cool sfeertje
I ² everyhting that is said ierboven bij hyevolture so don't want to repeat him ;p
 

eeezzeepeezzeee [be] - 11 years ago

aye y alreeady know my comments, very good shit, more structure needed tho and betteren opbouw. g-tar sounds very nice
 

Rag [be] - 11 years ago

yeah nice,
needs some work i think (but i can't talk 'cause all my songs are somehow unfinished)
but very nice, would change the drums and work on some more tension maybe
 

particle [be] - 11 years ago

well i kind of agree with our dear volture here i think, maybe also some more elements would be welcome to keep some tension, but good concept already! blijve geven!
 

Tjahzi [be] - 11 years ago

allrighty guys, ill keep geving my beste of maiself.

thanks for comments!
 

teebo [be] - 11 years ago

nice atmo, nice guitars, nice track. But i think it just misses some extra elements/melo's near the end. you should make it longer and harder, it doesn't really break los completely. But this song has potential and a lot of emotions in it. good, very good job. keep up!
 

Omyiga [be] - 11 years ago

don't know exactly what you have changed, but I definietly enjoyed it more; cool solo at the end + pro opgenomen gitaren. Tis mss wel gelijk da teebo zegt, it gets pretty deep around 2:00, this mocht van mij nog eens komen opt einde; perhaps zo vree plots een ontploffingske opt einde, me distortion guitars and heavy drums with lots of cymbals na uw afbouw. Butttt those are just ideas and this is already pretty nice he;p
 

Rag [be] - 11 years ago

jip certainly better
still i think this song could be much more!
nice guitarplay btw;)
 

omihoshbin [be] - 11 years ago

powerfull, schoon maat!, realyrealylikeit
 

babbaracos [be] - 11 years ago

that guitare solo is realy, realy nice! but too short
very nice sounds and melodies
 

Tjahzi [be] - 11 years ago

thanks guys! i'm broeding on some new ideas for the song, perhaps i'll adjust it.
 

eeezzeepeezzeee [be] - 11 years ago

live drums live drums from 1.20 or so woehoe pick me
 

eeezzeepeezzeee [be] - 11 years ago

much better, I mean.. maybe roughen up ur climax a bit more
 

CruizeOfFiction [be] - 11 years ago

great guitar work! (great!)

but the breaks aren't all that imo (indeed a bit too wet, and something structurewhise could be better as wel imo)

other than that...WTF!

(ow and that sound at 42sec sounds a bit offkey to me)


big thumb up, last part just blows me away

your rock!
 

Tjahzi [be] - 11 years ago

yay (:
know that the sound ain't that good croozy woozy ^^. but i'm prolly gonna buy monitors (huray) because it's too hard to mix with the boxekens i have now
 

Tjahzi [be] - 11 years ago

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HyeVolture [be] - 11 years ago

nice edit. built-up has improved, there's more action. I still think beats could be changed for more effect, but don't let this comment bother you, cause it's a very nice piece.
 

CruizeOfFiction [be] - 11 years ago

kerel

THE FUCK

werkt da es af, allez, neem het opnieuw op ofzo en maak et langer, kuist het wa op

manman
da nen tune

zeker da gitaarstuk opt einde, ma dan stoppet zo:( komaan hup hup hef je luie reet op!
 

CruizeOfFiction [be] - 10 years ago

LIJK IN DA IER

ma fack, dannentune
mix sucked wel immens vergeleken met dat nieuw van u (das dus een bigass compliment want zo slecht ist nu ook weer nie). Toch raar da monitors zoveel verschil maken, vooral omdat zo eerder onbewust een verschil maakt.

anyhow, herwerkt dit es! of verwerkt gewoon dienen crazy ass solo in da nieuw (en geeft dan de snare van da nieuw ook es wa extra clap ofzo)

anyways, kben gewoon luidop aant dromen;)

groensels
 
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