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particle - Chocolate

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more hiphop flavours! abstract hiphop with a nice sauce of electronica, just needs some more work, details and correcting some stuff , hope u enjoy
edit: youpie! i finished the fucker! added some elements but not too much actually, some fx, changed the ending , throw away the last part and played with the intro and afterwards i came to something surprising , pretty happy with the result also learned a lot of it, hope you still like it or even more ;)

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omihoshbin [be] - 9 years ago

VET
 

crolerbedo [be] - 9 years ago

second half is really cool, first is a bit too wicked for me (i mean it's cool and nicely done, but i don't really like it).
nice happy delirium hop dude
 

dialekte [be] - 9 years ago

yo spin that shit :)
 

particle [be] - 9 years ago

thanks dudes :)
@ crolerbedo, i see what you mean it sounds a little bit chaotic i think if been fiddling and twiddling with a phaser that kinda morphs the sounds too much
 

teebo [be] - 9 years ago

nice track, very lovely. but i would like it more if you used more pads i think. nice experimenting.
 

Skip [be] - 9 years ago

I dont know, but my visuals show me some cool toys, dancing around and being fonkay.
really like the melo's at 01:08.Thats one particle-ness I really like (like in the ow-goddamned-so-short demo "blabla", how is that track going by thee way)

Suggestions are; putting more elements towards the end, it gets too simple,and it like ,misses parts.
Why not use that first high-organ thing from the beginning at the end for an extra element ey?
to get that optimisme from the intro back on track.
really like it though.

 

Omyiga [be] - 9 years ago

nice, but I agree with teebo and skip, in the middle somewhere it sounds gelijk nog a little bit empty. I like the second part more too, nice sfeertje there. beats are cool again too
 

HyeVolture [be] - 9 years ago

others say: more pads! I say: more vocals, or vocal samples (type wax tailor as I said). now it's like a very good instrumental, without the additional vocals. I wouldn't put more pads on this one, because then it would lose the hiphopvibe. the organmelo is very nice and could be a change with the possible vocals. that's only what I would do (better: try to do) with it.
 

Rag [be] - 9 years ago

yeah nice hiphoppin', but i agree with most of the other comments,
maybe add more elements at the end (it's getting less interesting,
which is such ashame 'cause the rest is really nice!), but i do like the beginning and just love the second part :)
that first bass line is really funky too
 

EgonFisk [be] - 9 years ago

jazeker neger bob bop. yeah first half kicks arse
 

particle [be] - 9 years ago

thanks people!
hehe glad someone likes the first half too ;)
as for the empty parts, well i was just too lazy and didn't have the patience
for the pads i'm stickin' to my plan, not too much pads in this, awanna hip awanna hop
more is coming!
 

Skip [be] - 9 years ago

cool, next step, get rid of the lazy ass :))
all the potential ,think of it,and finish the unfinnishedness.
grtz
 

IskaRiot [be] - 9 years ago

me likey...
i also like hye's idea of putting in some vocals, don't know wax talor that good, i was thinking blockhead style, some quotes her en der, a simple one liner, chopped up a bit after a couple of times. not too chopped up, turntablestyle kinda what i had in mind... (so def not core-style chopped up, would be too much for the song, as you said, it has to stay hiphoppin')
cheerio
 

rool [be] - 9 years ago

nice phonky beatz, homeboy. same here: like the intro a lot, fan of the bassline at 0:35, also up for some vocals (check out the raps from the beastie boys, downloadable from their own website!)... and the abrupt end is top notch. peace.
 

Tjahzi [be] - 9 years ago

yeah nice!
you re going the hip a die hop a die way now, kewl ^^. you did a great job on this song mate!
 

CruizeOfFiction [be] - 9 years ago

nice groove man

good track^^

but indeed, some more elements wouldn't hurt..

love ya
 

omihoshbin [be] - 9 years ago

k'ga u ne keer moeten komen bezoeken jong, zo dak wa van uw inspiratie kan op snuiven, of oproken? ;)
 

particle [be] - 9 years ago

moede keer doen waar! kwerk wel met ableton mr kom producen is producen :))
 

catsauce [be] - 9 years ago

pretty wicked all in all, the organ thing at the beginning should be toned down a bit, it's kind of overpowering. maybe some more of that glitch stuff throughout the song would be good.
 

CruizeOfFiction [be] - 9 years ago

great edit pandecho!

more of story in it (less phlat 1loop-bassed)

ending is superduper cool^^

thumb up
 

adrenalin [be] - 9 years ago

MASTAH TRACK
 

crolerbedo [be] - 9 years ago

yeah, ending is cool, expand that !!!
And I say yes to the vocals idea, just take a few samples, cut them, twist them, stretch them and smoke them...won't be difficult and if you do it in some sort of "logical" sequence, it will give even more flow to that fonkyglitchhop beauty.
This was just an idea, but that track is already great :D
 

particle [be] - 9 years ago

yeah well maybe i'd add some later i'm not sure, but i should find samples first, that's another story^^
 

Rag [be] - 9 years ago

jipjip, still like it have nothing more to say...
 

IskaRiot [be] - 9 years ago

good edit
still a nasty track, but i still miss vocals that have been played arround with... would make this track yummie as a fresh oven baked blueberry flavour piece of pie ;)
 

Skip [be] - 9 years ago

hey, real good shit, great details added!
real nice style moatjeu.real nice.
...ow yeah! the ending ,wicked!
ja vree coole track gewordn, ja man.
:))
 

HyeVolture [be] - 9 years ago

yeah, great, now the more emotional, sad organ part comes in the middle of the hibbediehop. now: talking people in fifties radio style between the parts and this is tha bomb.
 

Tjahzi [be] - 9 years ago

still rocks
 

teebo [be] - 9 years ago

very good edit, damn you funky bassline stop making me dance
 

eeezzeepeezzeee [be] - 9 years ago

fonkyyy. I like
 

Phye [be] - 8 years ago

funky ! enjoyed this one thoroughly !
 

AnnoM [be] - 8 years ago

damn, people should use more glitch when making hip hop beats, fucking nice result!! groovy bassline, oldskool atmo... believe me, when you made a hip hop song even i like you did a great job ;)
 

Midiot [be] - 8 years ago

vet! t einde doet me wa aan tipper denken
 

HyeVolture [be] - 8 years ago

blijft echt ne vette.
 

omihoshbin [be] - 8 years ago

mixdown is echt subliem, ik wil jouw hersenen stelen en die dan vervolgens opeten zodat ik uw mix geheimen weet, to much? Yummie ;)
 

pornoPK [be] - 8 years ago

ah yes! nice track,the melody...
good work man
 

CruizeOfFiction [be] - 7 years ago

meesterlijk
 
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