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particle - Alan logh
Description
hello allan analog style track this time, lots of errors and unfinishedness
but there's something i want to know, i think i recognize the last melody but i'm not sure ( i really hope not because i like it ) what do you guys think?
oh and also the speedup in the middle, not a bit too artificial?
any other suggestions are welcome :)
thanks for listening childreeen!
edit: addes some sounds and stuff, finished structure, tried to take some care of the coherence thingie ;)
guess it's finished for now, perhaps i'll take a look at the beats later
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Comments
Omyiga [be] - 15 years ago
I think the it's a bit flashbulb-ish in the beginning; very schone samenhang van geluiden daar.
don't really recognize the last melodie from somewhere. Getting jealous of your acid bassline skills here =p owyes, the speedup was heel efkes "huh?" ma ni echt storend in my opinion
yaka [be] - 15 years ago
nice man
Skip [be] - 15 years ago
Its offcourse as you know yourself heel zeker, verry flashbulby ,but my thought is theres not enough of it so I vote pro.
hey bout that speedup, the part that builds up, I would make 2x longer sothat it would be more subtel the speedup .
the last part (dont recognise any specific tune there) I would also introduce somewhat subteler.
I liiike ,I liiike
cool tittle btw ;)
dialekte [be] - 15 years ago
Voxcoder [be] - 15 years ago
particle [be] - 15 years ago
i hope it was just me with that melody so i'll keep it , oh yes the roughness of the melo will get fixed too, it was something i added this night and immediatily uploaded after because of the doubts
and thanks for the other tip skip, definately useful =)
Ndus3alFrequenC [be] - 15 years ago
You've got some awesome producer skills!!
keep it up!
Rag [be] - 15 years ago
voor de rest nice track nice souns, and idd great basslines :)
phollox [be] - 15 years ago
CruizeOfFiction [be] - 15 years ago
not feeling the bpm switch...
real real nice track man, everything +++: bass, synths, breaks, structure, evolution, etc etc etc ++++
maybe a last remark: those stabs in the end are quite harsh and sometimes I think its a pitty that your songs change so much. usually its a gift, but sometimes I'd like to hear more allezja the same (samenhang)
big big
(big?)
ja big
OriginalT [be] - 15 years ago
particle [be] - 15 years ago
@ cruize , yes i'm alergic for repetition hehe , i just can't help it, too much from this and i want that but sometimes it leads to cool ideas too but i know... to master the force i should balance my focus! that way i will be a true jedi-nicht !!!
next time i'll be consistent!
particle [be] - 15 years ago
CruizeOfFiction [be] - 15 years ago
ja ma tis ma mierenneukerij ze
uiteindelijk ist ergens een trademark da compleet breken van u.. ma zo kweneieja kzou keer benieuwd naar zijn, tmoe daarom nie repetitief zijn
anyways
big bog nog
omihoshbin [be] - 15 years ago
cominthrough [be] - 15 years ago
voor derest I second cruize!
ma fuck ik kijk al uit naar den 30sten!
bassmonk [be] - 15 years ago
Omyiga [be] - 15 years ago
tis idd nice da ge precies wel goe zijt in variatie ma khoor gelijk da ge da laatste deelke zo achteraf bijgesmeten hebt. so if you'd introduce that iietske subtieler gelijk da skip zegt, zou t echt verry nice zijn. Nuja I like it now already very much ze :p if it's finished, I'll download it fo 'sho
HyeVolture [be] - 15 years ago
Tomastar [be] - 15 years ago
omihoshbin [be] - 15 years ago
particle [be] - 15 years ago
omihoshbin [be] - 15 years ago
IskaRiot [be] - 15 years ago
the ideal cocktail for a sunny afternoon...
randomuser [be] - 15 years ago
realy
i realy like this speed up, its ok like that
but maybe it could be better, but you always know it
particle [be] - 15 years ago
update is on the way, somewhat more coherance is added, don't expect too much though :d
Omyiga [be] - 15 years ago
goeien update
(Y) (=duim)
Rag [be] - 15 years ago
and the track itself is very nice too ;)
IskaRiot [be] - 15 years ago
Phye [be] - 15 years ago
kmis wel een melodietje rond 3.20 - 3.30 mr das gwn omdak een melofreak ben
top notch stuff :D
cominthrough [be] - 15 years ago
dialekte [be] - 15 years ago
CruizeOfFiction [be] - 15 years ago
echt
real nice that the maintheme falls back in at the end, and the tempo switch is less clear, so better!
baft
echt zotten track
Freakywrath [fr] - 15 years ago
pornoPK [be] - 15 years ago
Skip [be] - 15 years ago
Ti demax vengt.
Oe, en nice touch on the speeduppart, sounds much smoother and subtle.
Real good stuff
vree schoon uitgewerkt
omihoshbin [be] - 15 years ago
IskaRiot [be] - 15 years ago
echt nice smooth contrast tussen u pads en u acidlijntjes, job swell done chap!
AnnoM [be] - 15 years ago
really nice!!!
mariakerke represent!!!
:))
Tjahzi [be] - 15 years ago
you re going pro m an :)
HyeVolture [be] - 15 years ago
particle [be] - 15 years ago
Akwalek [be] - 15 years ago
Anonymous [be] - 15 years ago
particle [be] - 15 years ago
StorungStelle [be] - 15 years ago
maybe a little less notes in the final-leadmelo. butt it's just a suggestion.
thumb up
comphusion [be] - 15 years ago
Skip [be] - 15 years ago
da...die acidbasslijn tsaamn mee die synths en beatses, da klinkt zo vers é
frisheid mee kleurkens
keep cool
particle [be] - 15 years ago
think i'm gonna take another look at the mix, it could use some more attention
adrenalin [be] - 15 years ago
mrgasmask [be] - 15 years ago
eckhart [be] - 15 years ago
CruizeOfFiction [be] - 14 years ago