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VortexOfEntropy - Crap_

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Hi all,

I made this, this evening in a couple of hours. Seems like I had some inspiration ^^ It's faaaaar from finished, but I want to let you ppl already hear what I have.
I could use some comments plzz ^_^
230 BPM!

EDIT: Made the song longer, added more sounds, FX, synths,...
Mastering could be better though.....

anyway, ENJOY!


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CruizeOfFiction [be] - 15 years ago

nice track man, once again^^

I'd just try to give everything a bit more punch (to be honest I wouldn't know how^^, maybe some desto/saturation on the kicks (especially the second part of the frnechcorekicks))

maybe you can also try to take your kick and EQ it differently at the end of each bar, always a cool efect for more variation

and maybe some more breakish layers? (tip: make a layer of breaks that is the same as it is riht now, just out of different sounds. Then put a lowcutfilter on it, cut everything below the middle and give it a bit of resonance... so only the higher frequencies with a bit of resonance on it: always cool to give the beats more depth, allezja sma een ideetje, een tipje)

look at me just babling on about what ou could do, after all its up to you^^ but its got potential so just wat to give tippies!

nice track, I dig ya shit as alwayz dowg
 

OriginalT [be] - 15 years ago

thx 4 the comment and tips COF! Very useful!
I definitely make this song longer and BETTER!^^

 

Aceton [be] - 15 years ago

nice trakcske , tzit potentional in he :d
like cofke said , maybe more deph on the kickies , but fot the rest good job
keep up aceton
 

Omyiga [be] - 15 years ago

cool
a few amentjes erop would be nice I think ^^
 

OriginalT [be] - 15 years ago

I'll do that omyiga & aceton ;-)! héhé
thx 4 the comments guys!

 

Aceton [be] - 15 years ago

mister T your sound is getting better und better .
nice track
keep up
 

OriginalT [be] - 15 years ago

thx aceton ^^
 

Omyiga [be] - 15 years ago

jaak jaak, nice
don't know exactly what you added allemaal but good its seems more filled up;which is good!
 

CruizeOfFiction [be] - 15 years ago

cool edit, song is much more profound.

Right now I'm checking on my laptopboxkes, but I promess I will check it again when I'm hooked up to my system (I bet it will sound epic)

nice nice!
 

OriginalT [be] - 15 years ago

héhé, many many thanks girlz^^
 

Aceton [be] - 15 years ago

great crap
keep up
aceton
 

Tbiyakore [be] - 15 years ago

Fat nummerke mate!

echte OT style ( gelijk damme u kennen ! )
Begin aan ne set !
 

Anonymous [be] - 15 years ago

HEYzz!! Nice work tijl! what cruizoffiction says sounds cool! damn youve got lots of work to do i think....GOOOOOooooooooooooooooo tijl Its allready awsome but we want more depth , breakz , and effct sjit:p i cant do it so good luck man sure you can do it :D xD Greetz
 

CruizeOfFiction [be] - 15 years ago

zat zowa rond te kijken op myspace, kwam bij u terecht, enja eerste keer dat ik dit nummer hoorde op mn moni's en kmoe zeggen tbolt lekker man

echt puiken edit

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Tjahzi [be] - 15 years ago

crap indeed but still enjoyable :p
 

Anonymous [be] - 15 years ago

tstuk vanaf 1.10 min is echt vré goe ma op 1.25 min is u overgang nie goe, tis zo bam iet el...
 

Ndus3alFrequenC [be] - 15 years ago

nice track.. Maybe try to create a kind of break with hi hats.. or some other break.. Just to make it a bit more ( opgevuld) :)
for the rest good song!
Keep it up!!
Take care
 

phollox [be] - 15 years ago

fat track man, a bit frenchcorey, me likes!! thumb up
 

Anonymous [be] - 13 years ago

jupla
 
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