Electrobel

the kick is to short , it's a bit "hakkerig"

Not bad... only the kick sounds a bit ... How would i say this, "standard samplepack"... i would make a kick myself, and fill up the whole song a bit... But that's just what i should do.. It does have potential..
keep it up! grts,

ok, thank you for your honesty, you prefer my old kicks? or it is a problem with that though? I have trouble creating a kick which I like really. What do you mean by standard sample pack? because even when I changed a lot of the original

with that i mean that it sounds like you downloaded a samplepack, or just a kick.. it's a kick that's used a lot allready.. Originality sounds best! if you can't make kicks you are happy with, then download more vst effects to put on it, and start with a very simple roland 909 kick for example.. download many vst effects and try them out... you will definetly find a effect to create kicks you REALLY like!! trust me!! ;)

it's on, I use more and vst, but it takes time to find good.
you'd have good vst to advise more me? thank you for the link

you're welcome!
Enjoy it!!!

now I also want the link =D