Electrobel

cool!

At about half it starts getting good. Nice vibe, nice drive, nice sounds. But then it gets a bit "eentonig" because you get the same melody for a bit too long. Some things are a bit "storend" like the kicklike sounds you get over your kick sometimes, I wouldn't do that if I were you. Also, the beginning, it has some nice sounds, but it has a way too slow feeling, not enough melody, not enough bass. But all in all not bad I'd say. Make more like these, but with a longer piece like you have in the end :)