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cestqui - intermezzo

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a new time has broken out for me;from now on,all my stuff will be posted in ICZ;

untill the audiance decide if its finished enough;

i decided to delete most of my songs in here, to make a point(even top 10 songs)

peops who know me,know my temper,my principes, my humor...

it comes with the package,at least i'm not some profile(with his reputation) on a site,i'm a human beeing,

thats where most people go wrong;

enuff chit chat,here's a old song in a rewire package;

structure needs work,but i like to hear from you,what parts were best,so i can loose all the chit chat parts;or whatever is on your mind;

be constructive,explecit,be yourselve

thx,and remember no skin on a forum makes the forum,its the people on the forum,that makes the forum,greeeetz



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Elfish [be] - 12 years ago

nice, but too much hats for a calm house-track, i think

idd, the quality isn't that good, but why didn't you put it in ICZ?
 

eddie [be] - 12 years ago

*bassline - very good one
* rythm - try a more conventional 4/4 (don't do the double snare, it breaks the rythm to much); don't use the triangle either (imo)
*rhodes - melody is not convincing (it sound wrong in this track - the bassline and rythms say energy, and the rhodes say relax - sometimes this contrast is good, but here I don't feel it. Perhaps by reworking the rythms things will be better.
* vocal - not convincing me (don't really know why). Any one feedback here?

grtz,
edd
 

ZARk [be] - 12 years ago

the double snare thing ... try using it before a break or something, but not all the time like now.

i like the rhodes in it...
i agree with the vocals though, don't feel right.
 

cestqui [be] - 12 years ago

well,those details(triangle,braeks)comes later,now i have to get the base good,then i build around it,just added it to have some ipresion where i want to go,but it happens to get out of the picture(wanted to make something shaft alike-tv funk tune),so i realy like that triangle to get that feeling

bazline is actualy the 1 thing that goes to that picture,just wanted to have a idea, if this sound to sad to make that picture

 

cestqui [be] - 12 years ago

hahah,shit>>this is yhe shit,found what tyhe track needed(augmented chord),very subtile now,will upload soon
 

liquidbass [be] - 12 years ago

cool... especially the slide in da bassline get's a sympathy plus!!!!
 

kiande [be] - 12 years ago

wah wah funky guitar thing and bass are out of tune, again that hotchpotch syndrome. no hooks?
 

eddie [be] - 12 years ago

- bassline - good

- piano - still does not sound good to me (to easy)

- wahwah - out of tune like kiande said

- rythm - better (still not convinced about triangle though.. but that is taste)

- rhodes - ok, but you can get more out of it.

- trump/sax - does not do it to me - look for a cool sax smp or something because what you are trying will not work (imo).

- structure - deep house is more then put layer on layer... you still need to find out how to build up a track without falling in chaos (for some styles you can do it, but not for deep house (yet))


overall - still work to be done.

grtz,
edd
 

PlanetsCitizens [be] - 12 years ago

There's something of Jah Wooble in your bass track!! I like it !! If u don't know Jah, try to find two of his songs : Betrayal and How Much Are They!
 

dynamik [be] - 12 years ago

kick - too punchy
bassline - super
flute - doesnt sound very good though the melody is allright
do something with the enveloppe of the strings... don't know how to say it.

the whole picture doesnt seem to match dont like it allthough composition wise it aint that bad. just not my cup of tea
 

heatfuse [be] - 12 years ago

have my doubts about that plucked bass, but I guess without the filtering (though contrast is too big) it would be a bit dull...
 

vanpet [be] - 12 years ago

production is ok, melodies are ok, but no emotions come out of it. in fact it's quite boring.
 

Romek [be] - 12 years ago

I love that bassline! but the kick gives me a headache

I certainly dig that flute too! reminds me older disco music

I do think you need to shift with your bassline from key at a certain point, and then go back to the first one
It will create contrast in mood and make your piece of music sound more like "real" music

big up
 

cestqui [be] - 12 years ago

very contradictive comments,its obvious if ya dont dig the style,ya cant be objective;

but thx,for trying to explain the feelings about it,will take the comments in mind

if anyone has ,other idea's,taste

let me know,this song is in pauze-mode

thx,greetz
 

Cameron [be] - 12 years ago

the bassline is ok, but that the only thing! Kick is to punchy for tracks like these, and melody could be beter,
grtz
cameron
 

misstrohan [be] - 12 years ago

i've heard already a lot of songs of you and you got the feeling and talent for music, but the most of your songs are very chaotic

too much variation i think...

just a remark :)

cya
 

FabioPersonale [be] - 12 years ago

This tune i really like It's relaxed and clean Nice discoish sounds
 

Anonymous [be] - 12 years ago

nice
 

Funky [be] - 11 years ago

Nice song u decided to rewire! Can but say that I really dig the story line / idea of the song....I wish I could help u with some technical comments, but you're better in those technics then me...so I won't do that.... And big up for Zark for moving that ICZ to the main page...I'll also be posting my songs in the ICZ more....Because most of them aren't finished.. Anyhow...Keep going man! Grtz
 

owen [be] - 11 years ago

i miss this kind of funky sound in my life !!!
i went daaaark years ago its refreshing for me!
is that you on the bass it sounds live to me ?
nice one!
keep it up!
 

djsennahoj [be] - 11 years ago

I think this one is almost finished :d Nice and simple is A-ok.
 

Rabauw [be] - 11 years ago

In terms of mixing the only thing I can suggest is that the flute and strings could be louder. This is an older song and it's easy to tell. Cestqui-style 100% but it comes nowhere near your more recent tracks.
I like the ending, and the bass in general. Like Owen said, sounds live recorded, hard shit to get it sound like this, so that's a plus.
 

cestqui [be] - 11 years ago

rabauw,its too late,all my revcent tracks are deleted;figger it out yourselve why
 

Rabauw [be] - 11 years ago

Yes I know why, I always read the song infos before listening man :)
But I don't think it's too late to comment upon the song. Just because you deleted your recent songs, doesn't mean I don't remember anything from them.
It's never too late to try and give some constructive criticism/feedback.
 

cestqui [be] - 11 years ago

really try to think ,in terms ..of what can be better,but in a polite way....

or ironical way,things like..

are the triangles better then before,analyse it good;
as i said before,i have the true feelin the parts need to be played in a other order ,to have its full potential as atrack,story...like funkie put it so nice;

and i'm not finished,with rewiring;

i think the beatiful weather,gets the best out of me,greetz
 
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