Electrobel

yea- nice track. BUT i would try to extend it - perhaps look for an other rythm ? (i'm not to fond of this one) - introduce a deep bassline (perhaps with bassguiter smp?) ?
well these are just some thoughts

A very sad sad song according to me... you've got a unique way of telling things throughout music ZARk. Your music really cries out for images who would form that delicious salade on the side... keep 'em coming

I agree with both,
you really know how to put some emotion (minor chords) into your music.

One thing thats missing is, like eddie says, a sub-bass.
Your TX81Z should be more than happy to do this for you.

I wouldn't look for another rhythm, but would make the existing one less stuttering
or more fluent to add some swing if you know what I mean.

These adjustments would add some contrast to your track and would really 'finish' it.

Nice Ambience Zark!!

very nice use of samples