Electrobel

too repetitive, small variations ok, but always same tune and same beatpatterns. song doesnt evolve, no story in it. But I see this is your first song on Ebel, so as a starter it is pretty quite okay ;)

edit: music does a good job at creating the atmosphere you described, but try to take it beyond that image, it needs more emotions

Love what you did here with your first song. It's certainly a good start! But here are some comments:

Indeed the song lacks a bit variation. What can you do?
1. Change the melodyline, It's great but misses his effect when you hear it to much!

OR

2. Work in different layers. Throw another atmospheric synth (or two) on top with a slightly different line and fade in and out as much as you like.

Anyway nice work! Love to hear more!