Electrobel

has some nice sounds in it, nice elctro-track! make shure to record everything below 0db, cause it is all clipped (i didn't checked that on vizualisator, but i heard it instantly).
greetz

Nice chords! Sounds aren't all that, but I like it anyhow! Grtz

its like a horsemill on the fancifare,with a beat under it;

if you would just ,use some reverb and delay's,hell,a nice trick since ya used a filter,but some reverb on its return;

oh yeah the song is cool at 1min 38,that melo,you should build around that;

instead of that hyperkinetik melo;

and do something about that hi hat shake,place a closed hi hat,between them;

all and all,my points taking in consideration,you can finish this now;

i'm sure,it will be great,greetz

Real E-town sound
goe bezig

I like the idea!
but
-Get the bpm a little bit slower
-i don't like the beatsection (too prefab)

good general idea though!
aye
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Funky track!
Just try to avoid using those standard claps from the soundbank, try a nastier clap. Besides, I think it's too loud upfront in the mix anyway.
Good melodic transition around 1:50
I agree with what others have said, here and there the sound and mix should be polished. But overall you got it sort of right, except for that horrible clap.

I got the point where you want it to go ...
Work on it a little longer. Put some variation in the beatsection, add a voice or vocoder maybe, use some percussion, fatten the sound or beat it up (bitcrusher), ...

sounds like my old game-boy :D

i love the melody and the sound of this track (particulary part at 1:44). i agree with the ohters.. slow the track a bit down, change the rhytm section a bit (make it more like nasty electro style) and play a little with the sound of the melody.. and maybe put a big climax in it..

No offence, but the sound isn't all that yet imho...I'm certainly not an expert, but it doesn't sound 'right' here.. Maybe ask someone to master it somehow for you...This track really has potential i think, but the sounds are kinda fuck'n it up a bit...Again..if this is how you like it...forget all above ;) Grtz

Yeah funky, you're right, i'm not that good in creating a "finished" sound.
When i'm trying to make my tracks sound better i have the feeling that i'm just makiing it all sound muddy, but i know nothing about mastering/compression techniques, i just play it really loud through my dj setup @ home and adjust some volumes and EQ's.

This track is made in that way using fruityloops and it's standard effects and 3x osc synth.

thanks for the comments, especially the ones that explained why they didn't like it :)

edit: i will rework this as soon as i feel ready for it cos i feel it has a lot more potential then what it is now.

Nice tunes!!! :)

cheesy can be cool.
I'd add some more elements, it feels like it's missing something to be truly effective on the dancefloor.

hehe, fun!!!