Electrobel

i think you are talented, i hear lots of suprisingly good things, but theyre hidden in a track with bad sound quality, if i hear this sound in good mastering i would be shaking my ass! :)

Thank you, i'm still learning. Plenty idea's but the mastering is an art and i'm still looking 4 new techniques to improve everything

this is really a nice track!! just idd some mastering would help. i would make that booming-baseline (the one that hits every 4 beats) even deeper, so it really drills thru the whole house. for a better effect, do less sub-bass between the booming basses. like this: 1)BOOOM, 2)less bass, 3) less bass, 4) upcoming bass, 1) BOOOM. with the bass i don't mean the beat, just the sub-bass. now the bass is always present, a continuous sub-bass; if you let it go up and down, you get a more pounding result instead of a continuous earthquake-effect.
it can be that i'm wrong, cause i'm just listening on cheap pc-speakers. some compressing also helps for a more powerfull sound (but again, it can be that u already compressed, i can't hear it on these lo-q speakers).
end-conclusion: very good track (yeah, i would really want to play it in a dj-set!), only some mastering! how about that for your first track :D

It's not really my cup of tea but this pounds But as adio and firefrog say You need better mastering I see that you're from L'burg Maybe i can help you if you want