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Rabauw - Blood Tickles The Senses (cyberrock)
Description
I tried to look inside the mind of people who do self-mutilation as a way to alleviate their misery....It's got quite a catchy chorus I think.
UPDATE 1 NOVEMBER 2006: Remastered version with a warmer mix.
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As you remember the black void in you
Sucked into a helix of despair
And massive ruin
(chorus) What about your psyche?
Some things will never change
Even if you try the scars will stay
Pour salt in your wounds
It burns to the bone
Cutting the flesh ‘cos you feel so alone
Fearing tomorrow
Feeling so hollow
A switchblade for your relief
Fight pain with pain
Darkness crawls upon you
And you don’t know what to do
Feel so useless from head to toe
(chorus)
How to alleviate the pain?
How to get rid of all this strain?
As you remember the black void in you
Sucked into a helix of despair
And massive ruin
Darkness crawls upon you
And you don’t know what to do
Feel so useless from head to toe
Painful as it may seem
To you it’s a means to redeem
The blood tickles your senses
(chorus)
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Comments
rf061992 [be] - 18 years ago
little also "GROTUS" beginning the Nineties. For my taste, just a
little more fishing. Very good. ;)
Bedlam [be] - 18 years ago
Some things will never change
Even if you try the scars will stay
Pour salt in your wounds
It burns to the bone
Cutting the flesh ‘cos you feel so alone"
Oh my god these lyrics are a masterpiece.
The only words that don't have their place is
"from head to toe" in the end of the chorus, its an easy rhyme, and i think is an expression that does not really have a place in this song especially :p
Otherwise yeah the music is fine, you are getting better in a sence that things are less repetitive compared to the first track you were making so it's more enjoyable to listen to !
MucH [be] - 18 years ago
Great job anyway ;p
Ps : sorry for bad english ;p
Rabauw [be] - 18 years ago
@MucH: yeah other people have pointed out before too that the guitar maybe is a bit plastic. I'm trying to work on it, even though I'm quite satisfied with the way it is now. But it's a matter of taste of course :)
@Bedlam: thanks for your lyrical praise! :) As for "less repetitive": I've combined 4/4 with 5/4 in this song, mainly on the parts with many toms...nice and scattered, I guess it would keep things interesting. At least that's my personal vision of the song.
MucH [be] - 18 years ago
But again nice work b/c i think this is very hard to make music like that with software, especially realistic like this one
edit : You're voice rocks really well for this one ;p
yenneman [be] - 18 years ago
Very nice drums! I've also noticed that your voice is improving, could that be? Good fx on the voice too. The sound that goes solo @ 4'34" gives me the creeps...in a good way. Quality, as always.
Rabauw [be] - 18 years ago
No, seriously, thanks. I try to pay attention to the vocals, but I still remain very mediocre a vocalist. Fortunately there's this thing called an RV7000 to make it sound a bit better :)
Yeah I'm very satisfied myself with the drums, I've been wanting to do something with triple kick loops for a long time, finally managed to pull a song out of it.
Erophin [be] - 18 years ago
melodikpinpon [be] - 18 years ago
big+
Anonymous [be] - 18 years ago
Rabauw [be] - 18 years ago
melodikpinpon [be] - 18 years ago
Rabauw [be] - 18 years ago
djsennahoj [be] - 18 years ago
kaoz [be] - 18 years ago
about the guitar: maybe double it in a lower or higher octave with some fuzz on it? just a thought hé
Bedlam [be] - 18 years ago
kabal [be] - 18 years ago
Anonymous [be] - 18 years ago
rule001 [be] - 18 years ago
Great track!
+fav
(thanks 4 your comments)
S-cape [be] - 18 years ago
Really, you are a great singer, nothing to say about your voice !!
But for the music, maybe you can put a little bit more reverb on the guitars...? Great track, i vote yes :p
S-cape [be] - 18 years ago
Funky [be] - 18 years ago
Phye [be] - 18 years ago
even though it sounds electrik, metal fans wouldnt mind listening to it i think
nice compo, great job on the guitar, programmed or sampled??
the grunt could be better imo though the lyrics are pretty cool
Rabauw [be] - 18 years ago
firefrog [be] - 18 years ago
it's totally not my genre, but it sounds really good!!!
Bedlam [be] - 18 years ago
but seriously, i would like to get one of your reason files so i can transform them into a real metal song (real drums and real guitars :p )
It could be interesting, if you're interested :p
brandtkalk [be] - 18 years ago
transynth [be] - 17 years ago
Rabauw [be] - 17 years ago
One day I'll storm the charts haha :)