Electrobel

Description

I've always been a big triphop fan so eventually it seemed inevitable for me to try something in this style as well. However, I think this song somewhat balances between triphop and abstract hiphop.
6/4 for the larger part of the song.
Anyway, comments/feedback/criticism appreciated!
Enjoy...!

UPDATE October 20, 2006: Remastered version.

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A shockwave went through...
...our beloved nation
utters of frustration
those who cry in disbelief
are the first to turn away
when the malice is done
and obsequies has come
if you could you'd lynch them all
for vengeance you call

we close our eyes
when we see someone die
afraid we might be next
when will we live as one
brutality - monstrosity
and your passivity

bitterness, shame, disgrace, hate, pain,
anger, cowardice, distrust, stigma, contrition,
remorse, fear, anguish, action and reaction,
demonstration, revelation, pressure,
selfishness, control, security, hurt, guilt,
tears, mourning, sorrow, abhorrence,
condemnation

(repeat 2nd)

All of our souls ablaze
all of our eyes so blind
begin the dreaded chase
a culture clash we find
those who cry in disbelief
are the first to turn away
even as we speak
we face this world's decay

(repeat 1st)

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