Electrobel

yeeeeeeeah nice and smoooth just the way i like my sound!
i wouls simplify the beat just at the beggining before it kicks in (talking about the double snare !) i would just bring it in less often!
for the rest it just needs a little something to fill it in. like maybe simply a looped electronic type of sound (just an example!) anyway hope to hear the finished one soon !
keeep it up mate!
greeeets!!!!

intro could be more punchy and louder.Synth is cool but needs to be louder.beats r ok.bass is ok, but to hard.Verry cool concept, but still needs some variation...

doublepost

it does indeed need lots of work, im waiting for the right mood to continue working on it..
this is more like a raw sketch of the finished version but i wanted to hear some views from different people :)

thx for the advice ! :)

to me...the arp melo is the best,but the bazeline mis some notes to make it folow that beatiful element(5notes)

make 7 notes,and that melo in the middle,i dont dig it too mutch,the pad on the otherhand is fingerlickin,but ya dont use it too often;

for the rest...i like it...

long live icz section,big up for using what is been givin,expect more comments from me here,then any were else,greeetz

Wohoow, best thing i heard in the eletro zone in a long while, and it's not even finished yet, i'm really looking forward to the finished version.

I really like the bassline, it's really simple but that's it's power. Maybe you can "double" it in when you're working to a climax. "wawaw..wawaw..wawaw" or how a cool bassline looks in words :)

maybe experiment with a staccato type lead and some synth effects (with LFO and filtering),.
don't just replay the bassline with higher tuned synth paths.

i like the buildup at 3:20, maybe try to really add something after a buildup like that, another melody or something.

around 4:00 is my favorite part.
grtz.

Yes it's a very good chill out song, but imo a bit to mush long and perc a little to mush up ;) .But in ICZ ....

alright guys, i'll keep all your comments in mind when finishing this one, thx for the comments :)

the power is indeed in its simplicity as stated above.
Maybe in the first brake, the new sound pumps in a little hard but that's just how i feel it. overal i like it a lot and good job there, keep it up