Electrobel

nice one , but i think you're in need of an extra element here

Waaw.. No use of many sounds in this one, but you sure know how to select your
sounds! and make deep feelings come up.. I really hope you'll update the song someday.. It has so much potential to make it a more amazing track with those sounds and notes.. It makes people think! Maybe add a chill/quiet break.. one who gently caress the rest of the song.. That's what i would do.. But Still that choise is up to you! :d

Grts,

very nice, !!! would use somekind of reverb on the hats sometimes, make it more spacy .. maybe gentle vocal in it.. but, agin , very nice in my opinion.
like the simplicity in it ...
greetz

thanks people.

Indeed this song lacks quite some work. Also am I not really persuaded about the structure. I posted it under ICZ to collect some ideas about where to go from here. Simplicity was one of the main limits I set myself.

So please... share what this song tells you. I am very keen on your advice.

salut Steve
suppercool track ,soundten vum R3 kléngen echt gut :-)

merci... jo as wi dai radias am klengen¨ ^^

i would indeed add some more elements, like a soundscape or something. i like the melodie and beat, but i would use another kick, with a more acoustic feeling.
grtz.

mMmon ... qu'il est gentil ce morceau :)
J'aime bien ;)

maybe it needs some additional layering ... phasing in & out

nice idea, it sounds idd a bit empty,which is nice but it's a bit repeating imo,, some other parts wouldn't hurt i think...

lovely vibe.

maybe give one element more reverb to create a certain space between elements.
or little details.
or a soundscape behind everything.
or more and more piano notes towards the end.
or a subtle evolution towards an upbeat beat,4/4 becoming 4/8
or an extra element wich doesnt supports the melody but rather just little noises wich function as a little machine wich provides the power for your little melody (melody box)
or verry low pads or strings to have a solid basis...to work it all out into something more and more complex to finally end up with that first sweet melody.
or just work on it impulsively, can have great results sometimes.

enjoyed it :))

wow... thanks mates!

bin j'ai rien dit?????
long.....

very nice start
agree with Skip but not "or" but "and" in 2'37"...... :))

you laid down the basic of a nice track but if I had my way with it I'd do the following:
make the melody a tad more breathy, add some bg-noise from some deepspace recording and add some drones in which you could fade-out and fade in the melody.
Just my opinion.

Hey...
first of all...good work.
I agree with skip in the most points (reverb-soundscapes-strings), but
I would also add some sound-fx (water, wind o.s.) to the beginning of the track, or make it a little bit shorter...:-))

very good, but indeed an extra element wouldn't hurt...
maybe a pad that occurs once in a while, not too dominating, but subtle...

a subtle string would be nice
like it!

I liked! Very musical work.

thanksalot!

"I liked! Very musical work."

Oh i forgot to log in :-)

nice one mr liquid, I enjoyed!

oh yeah! good feelings, nice work!!!

thanksalot guyz!

didn't hear the first version but i think it's fine as it is now
a very enjoyable chilly tune

great track to start the day in a winterwonderland like today :)

thx!

cool sounds, love the atmo...
like the evolution of the track
sounds a bit empty imo, adding som low string like skip said would be nice... but i'm curious how it would sound with a funky-sounding-bassguitar... then again... the simplicty is what it makes so sweet imo...

Well in a first step there's a vocalist working with the track... then... lateron a cellist...

mmm, looking forward... :)

looking forwards the vocals which should bring this song to the final level... very good intru anyway!

thanks I appreciate!

Nice beat mate ! Really enjoyed the song :)

nice beat, great sounds, really good work...

damn... i like the voice... the atmo is very cool imo... sounds like the voice is coming from another dimension... like its not a part of the track. weirdness that me likes!

great song, make it longer!!!

(vum tronco ae) fannen den track instrumental ok, d'lyrics suwait och (ghostwritten :)), mee zefill reverb op der stemm...wees datt do nach dru geschafft get, wollt just mol ee comment oofgin.