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i' prefere generaly you works with Miss moore! there is more in two heads then only one, hehe

I like the idea of this song. Just not very found of the snare used. To be genuin electro it should be a bit more danceable, and have short 1/4 melo's or bassline...and have a dry hamering snare... u have a 8 beats melody, check most electro songs have 1/4 melos quite repetive and have a more dancable feel.
Ask Rantferox for his impression ..thats the man who def. knows what's electro.

Thx for comment !!!

I like this track very much, and am looking forward to hearing some vocals on it. The only thing that "bothers" me is the "cleanness" of the organ that begins at about 1min50. It just sounds to on-top of the other things. After the "like the weapons"-sample, theres some kind of string added, which makes the organ stand out less, which is much better imho! So the only thing I'd chance is the volume of the organ in the first part (1m50 till break) or i'd maybe add some echoes or some light distortion, to make it blend in more.

I'll check this track out for sure once there's vocals on it!

Feels more like ebm to me, wich I like btw! top track..again.

thx people

Really nice! Bout the snare...allready said...Rest of the track 'breaths' a cool authentic ( bit old school) atmosphere... The snare will give it the little bit more punch it needs imho...Great vocals/voice/lyrics! Grtz

sounds very very good, great music for great vocalz !! nice progression, got nothin to say, for me its perfect as it is, i gonna spend a fav here :))

many cheerz !!!

i agree that you need to change that snare , it will change the track a lot i think!
i like all the rest !
keep it up!
greets!

thx

i start commenting as i listen... nice intro sentence...ur basline( moog like ) needs more punch ..maybe a bit distreality? ...and..u seem not to have ritten the first sentence of the text ... ...alone holds the power to ..vision .. not quite understandable... at 1.13 ur moog sound resambles violins ..i can not quite say weither u added violins or just changed the moog parameters... ah oki u did use violin or contra bass i hear ...maybe change the octave somewhere would make it less heavy... text is really guud by the way ... a bit fatalistic , but yea..much dark things have to be enlighted... oki i heared every thing now ... i am deffinitly missing an octave change in the main bassline .. thumbs up anyway ..

indeed, the first voc is a sample...
thx for comment...
it is a string i add...
the bass is a modulated jv-880...

thx ero...

yep, very good! this is the best one of you i heard so far. vocals, synths, strings and beats come together very well. congrats!

nice one, nice composition..like the flow of the track.

Hm..push'n that 'close window now' link before the page has refreshed made made my comment not appear...Here I go again... :)
About the snair, it has been said, and I think it will give the track that little more punch that it needs... The vocals/lyrics are really good...She has a nice voice...The track 'breaths' an authentic ( bit old school) atmosphere... I dig the story... Grtz!

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thx all !!!

great !

Not my style but good production! maybe the snares a bit snappier but that's it! nice job on the integration of the voice, don't think that's easy.

what that wants to say for you EBM?
me I think that term is used to qualify a music cold, square, energetic, minimalist and powerful. a electronic music,
outgoing of machines and géneralement intended to be to dance often
very dark and physics before all(d' where the body term). it is a music which contains body, so much by the physical energy of its rhythms than by the energie of the voices. ex: Face 242, The neon judgement,
Daf, Nitzer ebb,...
if not,ta song is well but I am when same disappointed a little
because I wanted to listen of ElectroBodyMusic... There are terms
which are vast, ex: techno, electropop, contemporary, experimental...
much of things can carry this term. but I believe the EBM, it is
EBM... as much as the music gnawa, it is music gnawa.

que veux tu dire par EBM?
moi je pense que ce terme s'utilise plutot pour qualifier une musique froide, énergique, carré, minimaliste et puissante. une musique electronique, sortant de machines et géneralement destinée à etre danser.
souvent tres sombre et physique avant tout(d'où le terme body). c'est une musique qui contient du corps, tant par l'énergie physique de ses rythmes que par l'energie des voix. ex: Front 242, The neon judgement, daf, Nitzer ebb,...
sinon ,ta chanson est bien. mais je suis quand meme un peu déçu parce que je voulait écouter de l'ElectroBodyMusic... Il existe des termes qui sont vastes, ex: techno, electropop, contemporain, experimentale,... beaucoup de choses peuvent porter ce terme. mais je crois que l'EBM, c'est de l'EBM...
autant que la musique gnawa, c'est de la musique gnawa.

I understand what u say...
I am a great fan, and have been for more than 14 years, of front, nitzer ebb, daf and bands like that....

Now, I must say if u listen to tracks of those bands, specially front and nitzer, you'll notice that not all of them are cold or dancefloor or meant to result in physical experience of the track...
As all styles and terms ebm is about a state of mind imo...
Music that uses elements of other styles and has a bit of a non-conformist punky attitude or elements...
In this on I guess that element is the text and the coldness of the vocals..
But feel free to tell me what u think is a more suitable genre, and I'll consider it...

thx anyway for liking it melodik

thx naboo
thx bandarlog

you know my problems to classify my own track, it's the sam for yours, if it's not EBM , it's dark electro, remember me anne clark!
the snares are a little bit too in background!

thx brandtkalk

very nice.

personnally i'd add some long delays on the tails of the voice

apart from that it's not EBM, but like brandkalk said, it's closer to dark-electro or even industrial

what is the indus edge u hear here zark?
so what section to put it in?
there's no dark-electro section yet, maybe make it...
I don't think it fits the main electro section...

thanks for the positive comment zark, glad u like it...

I agree with you whom you are free to employ the term that you finds
most suitable. but it is true that F242, Daf and nitzer made songs
which are not EBM. which are new-wave, dark wave, electro-indus or punk. it is true that it is not easy to find the therme most suitable to qualify a music on electrobel. me, I have a lot of songs
that I would like post but which is not qualifiable. it is a pity. we would owe create us under kinds. ex: unqualifiable electronic music.


je suis d'accord avec toi que tu es libre d'employer les terme que tu trouve les plus approprié. mais il est vrai que F242, daf et nitzer ont fait des chansons qui ne sont pas EBM. qui sont new-wave, dark wave,electro-indus ou punk. c'est vrai qu'il n'est pas facile de trouver le therme le plus approprié pour qualifier une musique sur electrobel. moi, j'ai beaucoups de chanson que j'aimerait poster mais qui sont pas qualifiable. c'est dommage. nous devrions crées des sous genres. ex: musique electronique inqualifiable.

but i like realy this track :) i relisten just for pleasur :D . its realy, the snare its just little bit in background. need a little amplification. but its a great NEW WAVE song. me to remind me Ann Clarck. i vote +

cheerz melodik !!!

really nice!!
i must agrea with zark about some delays on the vocals.

(...and i would like the last kwartje ofzo propvol pumping percussion, but that would change the style ofcourse.. hmmm...ok..idonno ;) , just a matter of taste i guess..)

+fav

ceerz rule !!!

not really "dark" electro and not industrial at all imo, too soft for that. more new-wave-ish than ebm. if i had to choose i'd rather include it in ebm (since there's no new-wave section) than any other style, because of the voices, some sounds and the rythmic parts.

the snare sounds a bit too gentle imo, i would try with different sounds or settings and even some distortion, to see what effect it gives to the track, could be a nice contrast. it will make it sound a lot more agressive and darker but it might be worth a try ...

oh well....

nice track man!

yepz progressive and hypnotik Fav+++ to Gin Moore (she remember me old 90's electro tracks) very clean production good work ^^

i must agrea with rule and swan

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I agree on the style thingie with swan...
will try a distorted version one of these days...
thx a lot for support

big cheerz to melodik and manta for support !!!
cheerz bros

it's all natural :)
c'est tout naturel :)

you make me blush melodik ;-))

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thank you thank you ...you made my day

a plaisant song... very nice voice!
maybe a too loud snare...

a bit old school (not really my cup of tea) but i apreciate more your indus. song!!

cheerz humbug

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this song needs more reverb! and put some pccchhhht and krrrrrrrrrrr on top so it sounds as if its ooooooold ;)

thx dude...
just dunno what to think about those 2 gays on the pic

ah i think i get it...the bottle and the ice and the combat shoes that crack it so it goes krrr...

i'm a bit slow today... ;-)

hehehe
Body music no? ;)

yeah....
told you i was slow today...
i got ' snot ' stickin in my brain

ha me too!
i guess snot is everywhere these days.
uresong really needs more cheap reverb
goei stuff

kill the snot...
cheap verb...i prefer good verb...
feel free to check more of me stuff..
maybe u find things u like

Ja man, jezus christus en alle heiligen van de 39ste hemel, really love how the vocals come off in this one, it’s sooooooo 80s dark wave which happens to be all to my taste, yes yes. Especially around 2:30 there’s this extremely cool short spoken part, damn that went straight through my bones, it’s pronounced in such an affective and cold way. I mean, that’s really the kind of vocal arrangement I like a lot myself, and that combined with the contents of the song makes me relate to it a lot, it’s a theme I tend to write about myself (well, more or less, not 100% the same of course).

thx a lot rabauw...this comment makes me feel wonderfull...
This track was very much what i wanted to do with it, so it's very cool for me to read how much u like it..
cheerz bro

Production sound is really, really great...the voice fits perfectly, and your lyrics are cool too. For me personally, it's a bit too clean (f.e. the bell and organ sounds...) but I do loooove your kick and the slowly attacking strings. Actually my opinion could be compared to Swan's.

thx yenneman!!!

cool song mr Distreality.... soft....dance and rock for me....but important is the very good quality no the section....
i prefer this voices.... :))

thx mr rf...

good song , but not really my kinda thingy ...but a succeeded attempt of going back in time :)

thx edith

OK, I kind of expected something more from the vocals to be frank... Sorry, this probably isn't what you want to hear, but here goes anywayz: I think the vocals are a bit TO cold and monotone! Ok, it matches the words of the text and the mood of the music to do them non-emotional, but to me they kinda get boring halfway the song. (sorry, don't hit me!) The musical build-up gets pushed a little to much to the background by the loud voices. I think I would have put them less loud and gave the some more distortion or something near the end. (or make them sing more in an aggressive way, or even shout)
I don't know if it would do the trick, but they need something to keep the attention of the listener.

In all it still IS a great compo and a cool buildup. It sets a dark, cold mood, but with the vocals being not variated enough, it won't be a song about which i'm going to say "lets hear that great song again!"

tiens, i did miss this one...

massive sound... rythm suits very well for me, melody is nice but would've bord me a little without the vocals...
clear voice, too bad she doesn't really sing... can she? (maybe i should check the other songs as well)

cheerz, maybe u should reaman...
thx for comments
threat : no prob, everyone is entitled to his oppinion, it's all a matter of taste..and subjective...

the voice has an ann clark feelings...i like that

thx dude

We need Moore,we want Moore... Very good song, I like the contrast between the dark pads and the cristal voice of gin.Thumb up.

thx orfeo

like the voice of the girl....Gin Moore...hmmmm i'm jalous....hehe
:))
remember to my wife an old song of me and a friend....

many thanks

Good construction,i like the mix good panning.The voice is perfect on this song.

great track !!!!

thx very much anonymous

thx loulouw

I think it's too long !
I would like more evolution.
I don't known your work, J'écouterai tes tracks!

merci

very good track

thx anonymous

I do like stuff like this, Wumbscut rules(!) and you're not doing a bad job at all... but I agree that it should sound much more dirty-ish and the song should have a clearer dynamic and progression... it seems to get a bit lost in itself.

i liked it - i hear what some are saying about it perhaps benefiting from some 'progression' and the use of some delsy perhaps or added dirtyness in the sound.. perhaps the music is a little too warm in places... but a thumbs up!

;-)

LO

thx for comments

it was the intention to not make it dirty, most of my tracks have dirty sounds, this one has not...

thx for approval coms and votes people !!!!

nice structure and build up, lovely voice

many thanks

wow nice !

muchos appreciatos !!!

super

thx a lot

Nice song. Geat vocals. Don't like the organ sound though!!

thx doorchaser

superb

thanx

this is very good composition

many cheerz

this has a good vibe and great vocal

thanx

real nice track

cheers

I LOVE INDUS!

me 2, cheerz bro

wonderfull, i like this tune a lot...
should be on vinyl

thx, very nice comment ( would be something...)

chique

merci

sweet

cheerz dudes

OMG! Anne Clark has a daughter!!! I LOVE that song! You little lucky Distreality! :-) Please accept my congratulations, both of you! If you play live this kind of music, you will have a fan in the first row!

thx man...
we planned it for den haag, but she's in hospital :-(...

will do later for sure...

Good build up, great voice, nice lyrics. The organbass is maybe a bit too "bassy", nevertheless, great song.

thx dude

good song

cheerz

MAN! this is one pro sounding track.

I should have delved in to your songs a long time ago.

thx a lot....
maybe tell me your name...

greetz for great comments !!!

very nice song, good voice and good composition

thx a lot

very very good ! fav sure! great work!

thx sapaj !!!!

very nice, good voice

thx a lot maximus

fat track! i'm repeating i know but is great!!

cheerz

way stylish. yes i did enjoy :D

thx a lot...

i wonder why this track is in top 5...ow yea i know it's AMAZING!!
cool work with them vocals and melody combination is very nice, your best track and it deserves to be in top 5 man! :)) although not my favourite style, i'll put this on my playlist, 'cause it's really well done...Cheers mr distreality

thank you very, very much... i really appreciate it !!!

hey i nve thought of that thanx for the heads up. zoinky man zoinky

;-)

wonderfull...a pleasure for my ears !

thx

what to say?

love at first hear!

beautiful!!!

just come back to this

you are not obsolete

:-)

LO

thx guys !!!

great song

cheerz

come and buy again ^^ infact the instrumentals of this song are a bit too skinny for the allure and the spirit of the song ...last part of the song recuperates this skinny beginning ...

it was the intention to build it up slowly, to add to the dramatics...

thx for the listen mate

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if u post ur coms anonymous like this i delete it, only reason...

yeah, maybe dark electro suits better, but it doesn't matter 4 me, i even think the snare is more than ok, very cool track and indeed catapults me to the anne clarck 80's... +favz

thx a lot, glad u like it that much...

You seem to collect comments ^^
Let's add one...

Like the dark cello atmo...
very finished work.. everything fits...
quallity vocals ..

You get a vote.. not that you need one ^^

grtzz

thx a lot man...

beetje vrijblijvend...'k moet eerlijk zijn é
mixdown no problemo, dat dan weer wel

;-)

This is a great song!!! And it sounds very good!
I like the girl voice, she has something like the Kim Gordon stamp, it's simply beautiful!
+fav

thx man, i'm proud of this one myself, glad u like it !!

nice track on of my favorite of yours.

cheerz m8

Hey, it's a really nice style. realy nice sound, very proffesional. I listend a few of your songs, i think it's good for your music to use a vocal too!
good done!

thank you very much !!

wow, very pro.

thx a lot !