Electrobel

not bad some good elements in it. I m missing a bit of punch after the drop but i like melody

thx for comment, but whats punch?
hehe

use big fat limiter on this or avox punch vst. :heavy: the melodies are fine!!

I think with this kind of melody you can do a great thing but with a lot of improvement! Try to find better sounds and try to make your rhythm more "punchy".

lol still dont know what u guys mean by punchy or punch or whatever :p thx for comments btw

'punch' as in 'crunch' :p :p just that it steps more upfront in your ears :heavy:

yea cool ^^
mind your bassriff!

i've been in exactly the same stadium as you couple of years ago.Thinking the sytrus presets are that good, but watch it!try to make your own presets.Your melody here is very good you just have to change the sounds.try to get some nice plugins.
your structure is also good, but make more complicated drum structures.I'm telling you i was just like you.
but al that will change you just have to practise a lot ;)
tyl

nice one