Electrobel

Looking for a title? Well, how 'bout "potentially big hit"? Cos damn, I really LOVE this! It contains all the elements to become an effing great track, but I think a few things could still be improved. Make the first part a little less repetitive, and also the mixdown could be a bit better, to accentuate a few highlights in the track a bit more.
But apart from that, this is awesome! Really my cupatea! The vocals are sweet (your voice?), and the half-sung/half-spoken parts really lift the song to the next level, kind of depressed vocals.

Also the ending was very good, with the little guitars, really moving piece of music.
Goooood job!!!

thank you very much! i take good notice of your advice (is it a correct english???) and, about your question, i'm not the boy singing. We're two in this project... so, it's the other one. A guy on the moon that even don't know ebel do exist :) !

really good
un peut Radiohead dans le style,
le morceau on a envie qu'il monte a un moment, qu'il explose
my vote: 87%

This is a nearly perfect song to me!! It sound cool, has a good structure with some kind of a musical refrain, and a nice buildup toward the end!! Like the vocal-use a lot! (just a little accent, for which you lose 0.5 points :-D) Still a 9.5/10! big up!

thank you very much, guys!

very good

more punch on beat sure, i understand your point vue on this ;)
you know, multiband equal tout le bazra koi :d

mmmmm

i love that piano - sounds a bit like blonde redhead -

i would change your drums a bit.. make the hihat less noticable

the synths have something of a hazy desert wind.
love the backings on this one too!

njammie njammie..

whop it s in my favourites :-)

SWEET!
+fav!!!

good track but fuzzy mix, maybe try to open it up some more, good vibe

not a style of music i listen alot to but pretty good.. preferred this keys melody also over the one in that other track ;)

as for style.. think they recently invented another style (lol and again..) for this type of music i think.. shoegaze ?

more volume in vocal balance, and a little effect imo

waw! it's a very special day! i got my first thumb down on ebel... Btw, thank you to these who've let comments and @cloudhopper: u're right! shoegazer bands of the 80's are very big influence fur us.

Still great this one!

I don't like the voice, but i think it's personal, the track on its own is well structured...Maybe some playing with the bassdrum to increase the riddim?just a thought ;) Well done!

yup, stays very very good !!!
love it !

nice... not realy my style but i realy like it reminds me vaguely of massive attacks mezzanine.

good one

This is a great track.
I can understand that some people may not like this track but compared to so much amature sounding stuff on electrobel this really stands out as a fine piece of work.
Well done!

cool