Electrobel

Yeah ! your productions skills still get better, this track is nice ! Maybe your lead isn't phatt enough, try to put more mid-frequencies for it... The arrangement is not really trancy , tho...
try to do the following scheme :

16 or 32 measures of intro buildup,
16 or 32 measures of break,
16 or 32 measures of first climax buildup,
16 or 32 measures of second break, building the highest climax of the track
16 or 32 measures of climax ( the most uplifting part of the track )
16 or 32 measures of "landing", removing sounds here and there to come to the final note...

That's of course a classical trance scheme, but you should try to follow it, because all the track going with the same lead is boring and too repeatitive :)

Go and finish this one, it's going to be great !

Greets,

thanks flashyJ :-)

I'll keep it in mind

greetz

You suffer a bit from a classical error: you find one melody and stick with it during the entire song. Try to modulate, look for countermelodies, alternative riffs...

I just cant get why you put all this energy in such a conventional, or even conform, track. What you do isn't original and it sure wont sell! Because at the time you've gotten any good at it idols like Silver, Milk Inc and Tiësto will be 30 years old and the whole euro-trance business will move to Eastern Europe or other retarded partycultures. (please dont copy paste into my 'comment area' this time)

djsen, 1. It's a contructionzone so the songs in this part arent realy good duh. 2. The song is like more than 1 year old. 3. I don't want to sell anything 8-)