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reaman - ICZ dubby-thing

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it's been a long time since I posted something new (except DC song) and I really need to know if this song is going somewhere or not...
I don't even know if it's the right genre...

had vocals added but removed them again... It's a song that needs vocals, that's for sure...

tell me what sounds possibly don't fit or are too present etc...

don't ask advice very much (mostly post in General) but here it's definitly needed... thanks for checking out

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aphone [be] - 12 years ago

okayyyy, some very nice sequences , other less according to my taste.
I think the whole track needs more unity, some melo dub n funky enough to keep us listening, now its a bit too disconstructed (?) for me, the sound around 1:30 is bad for me, but the kinda electro dub vibe is very nice, got to search in this way i think. more dubby FX, bassline more upfront with more variations, DELAYS ON THE BEAT ... all classic dub things but keep this electro vibe, its very intresting... so for me, yesss this song is goin to somewhere, but you did not find yet the good place.
 

Funky [be] - 12 years ago

Special one :) I like the mood of the track..It's calm, but in the mean while also vivit... U got good different elements in it... Bit more in detail: Maybe a bit less trumps throughout the track, more spreading? I like your bassline & especially those strange sudden breaks throughout the track... Near the end, it really get's nifty... I'd like to hear those hats a bit more also... Not an easy track to work on imho...but the more a challenge it is :) I'd also remove the silent part at the end.... Gonna recheck it once more now...

Bout the vocals...you're right...The track would definetly benefit from it... I'd search for some movie samps/quotes & then mash 'm up with delays & fx....I'd stay in the same mood as the track..Bit weirdish dragg'n trippy vocal... Structure is really thought-through...Really like it...Wish I could give more suggestions but I just ran out ;) Thumbz up allready! Good luck with 'te finishing' of it! Grtz!
 

reaman [be] - 12 years ago

thx Aphone and Funky, for the comments so far...
constructive ideas already
it's a difficult song indeed but i'd try vocals myself... i even have some lines ready yet but the content wasn't 'me gusta'

the song is far from finished but i felt like posting it already because i was gettin' stuck... was adding elements but the basis wasn't ready yet.

to the others who are listening... add any constructive element please, really need it for thsi one!
 

Distreality [be] - 12 years ago

agree with aphone here...

it needs verbs, delays, flangie fx, and hardcore compression :)
 

Anonymous [be] - 12 years ago

you sock
 

reaman [be] - 12 years ago

hey mr./mrs. anonymous... thx for your brave message. How courageous and constructive of you to write that anonymously. I could delete your message anytimeI like but I'll leave it just to show how stupid you are cuz' in time you'll see you were wrong. This song is in ICZ so it's meant to get constructive comments because I want to make it a better song.

Why you even took the time to write that message if it wasn't meant as a personal attack? So probably we know eachother, which makes it an even more cowardly act.

And it's sUck, not sock... you're a sock!
 
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