Electrobel

nice

Very cool song. I like all the little effects that you've put into it. However if your intention is to make a dark song I'd leave out the 'pussy vendor' sample. This sample doesn't have any relation to the rest of the song either.

thx lunchtime ! Yeah I also tould that I've better let the pussy ventor vocal go :) I'm busy with my next dark track. I'm gonna make it more melodic ^^

Hmmm...first song huh? Well definitely not bad for a first song.

Some pointers though:
-lose the guitar-sample, it's absolutely hideous in this track. Don't mind some guitars at all, but it's goa, not technopunk nor industrial, etc and it really feels out of place in this song.
-think of some better melodies, the main course consists of the beat+flanging fx, which are only the basics of a finished goa track basically. Add some more melodies, and use more delay for maximal clubvibe effect ;) Listen to some stuff from Bandarlog here on ebel, he knows the trick I'm sure you'll find some inspiration in his music.

But nevertheless not bad for a first track, keep digging mate!

nice song to start with...i like the guitars and the atmosphere.keep it up

nice tune , very party party

Better than anything I've ever made :P
But that's not very hard.
Still, very nice sound, and I think the guitars fit in quite well. The song has a nice whole feeling, to my opinion. And idd, the "pussy vendor" sample, either you re-use parts of it, or you lose the whole thing, doesn't relate to the rest of the song as brambo and lunchtime said. Still, thumbs up!