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DeHomunculus - never to wake up again

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started as something completely noir. but i wanted it to be a bit more vividely. that was where the beat rolled, alongside a second bassline. it's a basis, bit it needs something more.

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yenneman [be] - 10 years ago

Weird atmosphere, a bit 'mental, neurotic, split personality' and stuff.

Bassline needs a bit work, she's too loud also imo. Your freaky piano doesn't seem right at first glance, then again it actually fits mood...raise the high freqs on the piano a bit, plus a little playing with the velocity.
I do like your chill beats, and also the whistle-bottle sound in the background.
 

DeHomunculus [be] - 10 years ago

the piano is indeed not always a hundred percent correct, and it is meant to be that way. it has more expression this way i believe. i'll take care of 'm basses. and i'll see what i can do about the piano. but i won't make it "correct" :D thanks!
 

dontwakemeup [be] - 10 years ago

what a nice title :)
 

Rabauw [be] - 10 years ago

I follow Yen about the neurotic character of the song.

Maybe that the bass is too loud indeed, hmm...

Why not try to put in a little game "piano versus strings" kind of a melodic battle, to have some more variation in instruments?
 

meutn [be] - 10 years ago

hmmm, this doesn't sound so freaky or neurotic? maybe i am? :D
anyways, good shot here, nice stuff :)
cool work on the beats too, really chilly ma nilly
 

DeHomunculus [be] - 10 years ago

hmm... perhaps i could try...
dontwakemeup: :D
thanks all!
 

CDawg [be] - 10 years ago

liked it at the beginning. but kinda eentonig.. good melody anyways
keep up
 
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