Electrobel

Weird atmosphere, a bit 'mental, neurotic, split personality' and stuff.

Bassline needs a bit work, she's too loud also imo. Your freaky piano doesn't seem right at first glance, then again it actually fits mood...raise the high freqs on the piano a bit, plus a little playing with the velocity.
I do like your chill beats, and also the whistle-bottle sound in the background.

the piano is indeed not always a hundred percent correct, and it is meant to be that way. it has more expression this way i believe. i'll take care of 'm basses. and i'll see what i can do about the piano. but i won't make it "correct" :D thanks!

what a nice title :)

I follow Yen about the neurotic character of the song.

Maybe that the bass is too loud indeed, hmm...

Why not try to put in a little game "piano versus strings" kind of a melodic battle, to have some more variation in instruments?

hmmm, this doesn't sound so freaky or neurotic? maybe i am? :D
anyways, good shot here, nice stuff :)
cool work on the beats too, really chilly ma nilly

hmm... perhaps i could try...
dontwakemeup: :D
thanks all!

liked it at the beginning. but kinda eentonig.. good melody anyways
keep up