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DeHomunculus - like a bubble on a needle
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lounge and triphop, about two of humankinds greatest inventions ever. and i combined them. well, not exactly. i just made whatever the hell i wanted to right now, and it turned out to be a little of both :Dwell, obviously, i'd very much apreciate any constructive comment.
edit: i did NOT remove the reversed snares, but besides of that ots of small to bigger changes have been made (a second lead, a slightly different bass during the climax, more drums, a second bassriff, and the reversed snares have been slightly toned down.) enjoy ;)
edit: made a better outro, and some other smaller changes. may the force be with you!
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like a bubble on a needle
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Comments
SandwichGarnier [be] - 16 years ago
Bass and electric piano are cool too.
Maybe add a fourth element at the end ?
SandwichGarnier [be] - 16 years ago
DeHomunculus [be] - 16 years ago
Anonymous [be] - 16 years ago
Skip [be] - 16 years ago
I would check for the snare to be sharper qua sound.
You should add one element...like a...guitar or somtin'...
those reversed snares or brush snres...dosnt work I think,maybe try to lower the volume of some of those.
Chill track anywayzz
grtz
DeHomunculus [be] - 16 years ago
thanks :p sounds better indeed in my own opinion. mind you: it's just a slight bit ;)
Distreality [be] - 16 years ago
i'd replace that imho
also i think you need some tight compression on the kick caus it gets kinda lost in the mix...
check out your frequencies and play with that...
the ideas are good, but it needs a bit more mastering work i think
and indeed add a new element, maybe a trumpet here and there...
i like it, but it's not finished imho
Crausy [be] - 16 years ago
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Midiot [be] - 16 years ago
IskaRiot [be] - 16 years ago
DeHomunculus [be] - 16 years ago
well, i'll have a listen, there's this annoying problem with my soundcard right now... don't know all of a sudden started to act like a complete bitch, so i can't even continue the work on this track. but i'll look for perhaps an alternative, for somewhere halfway the track.
HarryPoppins [be] - 16 years ago
DeHomunculus [be] - 16 years ago
Rabauw [be] - 16 years ago
Drums sound very lively again, almost like a real recording. You know how much I like scattered drumming, it gives a touch of intelligence to a song, cos it requires more effort to focus.
The end was less good, with the bass/piano, I mean, suddenly the bass stops, while I was really waiting for either a bass solo (you can put some more notes/bass variation at the end inbetween the piano sequences) or either a faster piano (add more 1/16s), and then have it end with just the bass once more solo and in stretch/long note.
DeHomunculus [be] - 16 years ago
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Anonymous [be] - 16 years ago
Rabauw [be] - 16 years ago
Was really curious to hear what you've done to the outro.
owla, da's wel een serieuze verbetering!
You've put a lot more notes and melody to your outro, and the final part without the bass and when the piano's solo is really sweet and thought-out well. Gooood job!
DeHomunculus [be] - 16 years ago
thanks :)
Omyiga [be] - 16 years ago
ma voor de rest: very chillywilly
en wijs gespeeld met die cymbalen enal
so good job é
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