Electrobel

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The vocal by falcon is preventing the good listening of the music. I would says that the vocal performance is not that good !

sounds verry 80's and verry live-played& singed.Donno if that was the intend.Feels to misery-like(sleur) to me...

oufti O_o

Guitars would work if you'd master them as it should, but (and i'm sorry if it's your voice) but it sounds 'vals', well maybe you intended to make it sound detuned?Good idea, but the voice is not my taste at all :) Grtz

thx guys for the anest comment and yah i now that a cant sing heheheh ! but i try its experimental he

At least you try it, many people wouldn't even do that, i know how hard it is to sing.Grtz

To be honnest I listened to the song the first day it's been online, but couldn't write a comment 'cause I didn't wanted to hurt you. BTW this voice seems to be a problem. Here's a receipt adopted by many people : don't try to hide this default ! Make it something personnal. In this case, I guess that screaming instead of trying to sing would be a good approach. There isn't gonna be no notes, so it won't be detuned. Friendly.
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PS think of Public Image Limited (PIL) or Screaming "Jay" Hawkins…

maybe use more verb and some delays on the vocs to smoothen it in the mix ( without losing its character ) , andmix it down a bit...

compo is good and the atmos i love...

auuwch ... this didn't sound all that right imho. ... sry bro, i've heard better stuff from you

yes i know it ElfenKommando ! this is one of my worst songs ever hahaha !