Electrobel

very nice atmosphere and beats, nice piece of muze :)) as a suggestion i would say, make the melody a bit louder, introduce an extra melody line and improve the rythmics , just a suggestion éé ;)
allesinds tis al een very very good base!!

woehoe!thanks for the fast aprouve!
Merci é moat! ook voor comments.tis een oud nummer dak zeker nonkeer wil editen.

I was personally verry pleased with the verry special beat,like somthin that's constantly flippin and transforming in and out in a loop.

agree with particle + the evolution could indeed be a little bit faster

nevertheless, I already quite enjoyed it :)

beat is indeedly superb!
and as fatsoforgotse hiere zei..
the build-up indeed needs to be faster imo..
groeeten

1st test on small boxies :
intro reminds me of a summer afternoon festivibe, the glittery blips r verry tastefull but make ya want more...and all there is is this empty synth...MOOORE...voelt fijntjes en fragiel als een warme traan in een koude nacht, but we want more melo, more feeling, a real blijtsessie impv 1 fucking traantje...ma ja, fijntjes is het wel

2nd test: on better sound + saved :
perfect intro, de glitterings dont start to late, but that synth idd needs to be worked out more, actually, FUCK, this is the song i have to make, this is perfect to sing on... sshhhht, dont steal my idea :D

i would NEVER put some singin on this track man.
You do it, but on your tracks please
Anyway i'd never steal your idea Akkedude.
Plus,if you add some singin,you HAVE to add some words and words are just too human(as a said remeber)
I think music without words is PURE music.Music with words or singin is way too human I think.On music with words you can't get away as deep as music without words imo.
But hey,if you put your poetry skills in music ,that would be an other story.This is all my opinion ofcourse(so that we understand each other)

Thanks for the comments lads,this is old and needs re-edition,so...
Ill work on it.
I remember having terrible difficulty to finish it.The hardest work(often) is to go from 'allmost finished' to 'finished',lots of you could relate to that,...
thanks again dudes

i totally agree with you skip, its a bit like the diference between a book and a movie...
edit; and now i check the track :)

i enjoyed a lot, but effectively, in myhumble opinion, you should add more element to make it more alive and organic...
thumbz up

I will,I must
thanks hosmOz!

those are some very true words skippers! i couldn't agree more

I like The Ambiance in the beginning it's very good. but the beat it's too repetitiv i think, it's annoying, maybe try a break or found a trick for directing sometimes the ear toward the atmo.

very chill, good work, nice glitchy amient sound..

iets minder rechtlijnig zou geen kwaad kunnen, maar dat is maar een detail

duim omhoog

lekker kwiek beatje :) i like it

yeah, it's a bit empty ,and the beat gets quite repetitive after a while...
this is more like a background...so had new elements and it can be a very very good track

das hier weer een dijk van een song hé! keigoe
im in luv wis yer muzieq, meer van dat!!

vre schoone beat , klinkt echt goed ,tgeheel mag wel ietske voller idd, ma nu al meer dan de moeit om uit te luisteren

Alreaddy bussy editing the track,thanks to all of ya.
Otherwise I would have gone passive-styler on it.
cheeryo'z!!!

idd nice trackie.
butt such a long note, i can't handle it.
thumb up for the beat, butt variation is allowed.

was ment to be an ambient melodie,it says in the description.

Very nice track.
Maybe you should add some more variations around 3'30 (or shortens it?)

editting in progress!

oei, dien enen comment is voor edit haar lied.. raar
ma ik vind u muziek ook heel goe ze.. ;)

hehehe

enjoyed that ! nice work...

aan Harry;kdach't al, dienn doe nie juust...;in leuv ...with my music???...hmmm....not quiet what i expected as a comment but its ok i guess.
ok...terugtrekking van harry pops'-luv comment aanvaard!

very good stuff idd monsieur skip!

wauw! nice ambient-sounding background strings(?). I'd make them more prominent, add a bit of basskicks more drums et voila, you're done.

well crafted

I waited more variation...
but i like very much this "organic" beat

very relaxing stuff! Nice balance in beat and melody.

thanks Kolf.
I like it like it is ,but everyone would like the evolution in it to go faster,and I dont mind doin' a new edition of it ,so,...new edit.soon....

so now I got some time .. my comments : D

beginning of the track is ok .. but has a very nice building up .. . really chill to listen too

love it, +fav

thanx Partiekel
Also for the good services.
Ey ey. ;)

very good mix, spaceness and closed in a same time.. good work monsieur skip

great song, really good!
i'm a fan!

please,not too much fanmail please
merci T-beau.

My personal favourite of yours.. matter of taste I guess.
allthough I got the feeling (a feeling deep inside, oo yeah) it needs some more mid or low frequencies here and there to carry the whole..
saved it, offcourse.

I think the sound is as I like it now.
to me it has that allmost hidden or personal feeling to it.
I really like the combination of glitchy beats and soft sounding melodies.
I really like that contrast of two totally different layers wich are in total harmonie wich makes more dept in your track IMO.
Thanks anyway Kurlykop,for being honnest en al.Appreciate it.

ok ; i'll think of that.
and about the length,I almost did shortened it,by cutting 1/4th or 2/4th of the first part(not the intro)
*** This comment should be under Crolerbedo's

simple:
one of the best producers on ebel

jeej! nice glitchy beat man!
evolution and variation could be improved I guess (ambient or not, although, this could be a discussion for quite a long time hehe), when I say something gewaagd like that, I mean the first part.
The others parts are good, chilly my nilly, skippy!
I hope your invasion on ebel as I watch it, is a bit softer than Polen's invasion in '44: you tend to reign ebel in no time!!!)
maar ik gun het u van harte: mooie tunes in zijn geheel beschouwd!
keep up the good work!
getekend (en alvorens je het zelf doet):
Haaj Voltjer

oh yeah

en alvorens op de vingers getikt te worden door bart de wever like geschiedeniskenners en in feite iedereen die tot in het vijfde studiejaar geraakt is: polen werd geïnvaseerd in 1939 en niet in 1944 zoals ik zei, excuses skip.

Yesssssssssssss!
That's what I like - direct to HD

@ quioui ;thats honestly THE best comment I ever got,thanks a trillion...and good luck on the finals!!!

@ High Voltuer ;merci voor uwen comment extra lang en eerlijk te houden,...
About den intro;no can do mister,I like it as it iz.
cheeryoo'zz!!!

@dialekte ;simple yet effective,thanx man!

yeah very nice, still a bit long imo, but good sensitive piece.
I think you could make the outro more "tearful" by adding some piano or harp sound following your pad...

second listen ... al swell but the upfront beat starts to bother true out the whole song. try to make it fade or reverb once in a while...or add more layers with more bassdrums... but since uve got an almost board of canada like mood...or even relaxation music!^^ hehe... cheers

allright,Ill see what I can do for you.

What to say..i never listen to this kind of music, but that beat sounds really cute, bit of an 'inocent' song if you know what i mean, i liked it prety much.Grtz

Indeed man,inocent indeed.I guess its a piece of myself that wants to come out sometimes,hey! freedom of expression.That brings beautiful things!

Thanx for the trip
n(^ù^)°

though me an eternity to load it, fucking connection héhé
like the track, its quiet simple and slow but its totally working.
Iam not really fan of the sound of the second melody but i just noticed it when it came in...good job again skip...

i like the soft skip. this track is so easing... it just needs a björkish voice.

...ok, Ill ask her for a collab. I promise nothing :))
thanx rool

grand, very emotional, when I hear this I just wanna give someone a hug and tell them it's going to be allright :) +fav