Electrobel

yeah good one for a first! the core/amen part is really good! like I said: maybe a kind of atmo as background would make it less empty, but certainly a good start! thumbs up (dus in feite twee thumbs up, ma das vals spelen, dus tblijft op ebel bij enen)

you have the main melodie,but you should keep the bass line more often. just to fill up the lonelyness of that melodie,weetwel?
And should try to put more "bijpassende" elements.
Experimenting is key!
There is certainly potencial in it.
cheerz

niiiiice (south park "niiiice" )

i did not know that cex made hardcore kick hehe ;)
i like the melodies but less the beat

thanks for the comments, i will consider your advice making my next track. like i said, first one decent enough to post, mostly i get bored with my songs and i never finish them. but i like to see them as an oefening. don't feel like editing or adding stuff to this one, time to move on with something else.

to dialekte: got bored with the breakz zo i added a little boenkeboenk stuksken.

even though i get enthusiastic about each song or piece of song you let me listen to, i really enjoy this one! so, a high degree of enthusiasm this time. and pride! :)
a lot of groeten,
belle helene (pietssj me!)

you made my day anoniempje ;)
i'll pietssj you soon enough :D (and more then once now you asked for it -moehahaha-)

;)

as i were lying in my bed i had such creeps of the nice fairytale but than came the core and i thought mnei because it was endless and than came the fairytale back and i was suprised by it!! it's a really nice song to sweep away

thanks mate, just think of the kor as the an invasion of evil forces in fairyland, but the fairies battle hard to get their mellow life back and succeed. up yours evil forces :)

One day, you're gonna make it to the top :)

heel mooi Sigurd :-) groet van Suzan

Die deuntjes int begin zijn echt gay en ze staan in een veel te groot contrast mee dan da core gedeelte, en den bas is ook vree slecht ma wel goed geprobeerd!

ik zei toch dat het het eerste deftig genoeg was, nie dattet supergoe was.
en ipv enkel anoniem te bekritiseren kunde mss wa tips geven....
ma soit, al blij dak genen duim omlaag heb gekregen

not bad not bad... I liker the middle harder part. Sometimes got the feeling that main melo doesn't end too well but good start, keep up!

thanks eeezzee! the melo things is caused by too much reverb, that's wy i was about to master, but ididn't do it eventually :)

cool core part :))
melodies could use a work out but it's a good start :)
grts

Nice! In the core part the break is a bit to far away i guess... you should make it louder.. But good song!

ha cool hadk nog ni gehoord, nice! idmkoor ftw

hehe thanks, tis al een oudje he, kdenk zelfs mijn eerste ooit ^^

nu dak het zo nog is herbeluister, mss dak het wel een edit enal, misschien that is... :p