Electrobel

good track, but some mixing issues imho

the snare is a bit too much upfront and the hard hat as well

reduce those 2 and it will be a lot better i think

nice work

first of all, this song has groovepotential

but... (imho)

the part from 1'10" til 1'49" and the song in general lacks variation.

it's a nice bassline but lower the volume a little (-2dB), try handling the envelop or the release a little from time to time to get more variation.

the rythm section is a bit too full/too present for my taste... i'd drop some elements once in a while

the jazzy elements are lost in the back, get them more upfront

verry nice! and now for the tips( from an dont know if i even should be giving tips guy,becaus its my opinion afterall) but i would crank up the reverb on some of your sounds like the tamborine,put some more ritme variations in all of the instrulments, and maybe a break ore two.thats all i can say, its verry nice track with (like said before) great pottential! ahoi

Nice track! But as sais before it needs a bit more variation, maybe add some rhodes, rumpets or saxophone... Also the whole seems a bit to much panned to the left... But It's a good track with a lot of potential!!
greets
greets

in the current version I removed the distortion on the drums and cranked the snare and hi-hats a little bit down. I was waiting for some comments on the structure. I think you guys are right about the variations. I think it misses something, but I'm not quite sure what I'm going to add.
Some rhodes seems like a good idea.