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OsanaTwuk - number not

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I can not make comments on what message or feeling I expressed with this song, I just like art, music, sadness, happiness, butterflies and dark clouds. I am just me and this is my song.
Dry description and notes you can read under here.


A basic song made in fruity loops with different melancholic melodies
Starts very calm and the tempo gets up until the end it's modest breakcore-ish.
The whole part with the synth that comes in at 2'54'' i will probably remove from this song as it doesn't fit in what came before.
What I did from 3'32 was just a very quick messing around a little bit to give a wild touch to it.
So changes will be made.
Hope you can give me some feedback, thanks!

listen and command!

dzukedzukkedzuuuuu!

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Skip [be] - 16 years ago

nice harmoniez and buildup,
watch out that the snare doesnt take too much attention,try using a variation of it(a shortened one) together with the one used.
wich btw is a good one, but all along the track is a bit much.
You could introduce the dubbled beat with a subtle fade-in to kinda mix slow and fast beat in eachother.
(the synth at 02:45 kinda stings too much.,imo)
Try to experiment a little more with synth-sounds and melodys (who could be a little more complex)
btw Cool title,I really like.
Could also be a bit longer,especcially with that breaky part.
anyways,nice going,and good luck further.
yiooo
 

jelle [be] - 16 years ago

yow skip
thanks for comments!!
good tip on the snare, but i don't know how to let things fade in in FL and i really would like to know
and euuh wat is "sting"? behalve dan die police-kerel
thanksss
 

babbaracos [be] - 16 years ago

Nice ideas but I agree with skip, some sounds could use some touching up. I don't like the synth at 3:50. and maybe some more bass? I do like the bells and overall feel, imo this song has potential just work a little more on it.

easiest way to fade in and out are automation clips.
just right click on the volume of your channel, then create automation clip. now at the bottom of your playlist you see some kind of graph, you can easily adjust it there. it'll point itself out
 

Skip [be] - 16 years ago

héhé well sting (steken);is used as a friendly word to describe "steekt tegen"....zo van tsteekt een beetje,weetwel.

to shorten a snare (one of the ways is); in the samplebox(da één kaderken,waar da ge uw sample ziet onderaan,wel daar ebde onderaan links 2 knoppen ééne IN en OUT,moet keer aan dienen OUT draaien ,zo gade uw sample zien verkorten.

En om ne beat te fade-innen of fade-outen;maakt één patern,doe dan alt+P (denk ik) om al uw beats in the pianoroll te laten steken,dan ,in pianoroll moede da stuk dan paar keer copieren ,en in pianorol nogaltijd,daar kunde onderaan gemakkelijk de volume van elke hit/sample vermindere of vermeerdere...
alé deleut.
jiéeuow
 

OforOdetta [be] - 16 years ago

cool nummertj!! goeie opbouw en melodien ... en skip heeft gelijk ... maar tegensteken doet het zeker niet :) grtz!
 
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