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OsanaTwuk - hypocrytsymphony

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The last couple of days I was ill and this is what came out.
I motivated myself to start with a nice song, not too many errors or cheap sounds.
It's a melodic song at 180 bpm, I know it's not perfect yet, but that's why I put it here to get some feedback.

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Anonymous [be] - 15 years ago

I like the melodies, I like it most at 2:40 but the breaks could use more variation....
Still good work! Keep it up

Grts
 

Skip [be] - 15 years ago

nice buildup of the harmony.Some notes could be longer.
ah, nice :)) the little one comin' in.
sweet mood ,love it.
at 02:08 I would put the breaks (not the 4/4 kick) more upfront, so that the whole thing would break loose some more...
real nice even if some experience is still needed.
also to try;the shakers that play together with the 4/4kick;I would try like this;" kick shaker kick shaker,instead of the 2 together.
At the verry first melody,you play 2 notes together the 2nd,3rd and 4th notes are just the same but in different "maat"(high and low?) ,I would try to use those low notes for even more harmony by using thel differently (not super nescessary)
Besides that;alot of potential with good ideas.
greets!
 

StorungStelle [be] - 15 years ago

nice man, goe bezig.
happy and good idm trackske.
 

Rag [be] - 15 years ago

yeah very nice track! could use some evolving in the beats maybe (not sure of that) and maybe a little climax thing, in general very good :)
 

particle [be] - 15 years ago

nice cute track :) mind the mix
 

Foxn [be] - 15 years ago

Great song. maybe a little change in the jungle loop at the end would be nice.
but i really like the song.
big up wi
 

OforOdetta [be] - 15 years ago

eey ! goe bezig zeg !! mooie melodieen en opbouw, love the mood
kzou just nog wa prutsen aan tgeluid van da jungleke ( vooral in tbegin) but i enjoyed this song, yes
 
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