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OsanaTwuk - hypocrytsymphony
Description
The last couple of days I was ill and this is what came out.I motivated myself to start with a nice song, not too many errors or cheap sounds.
It's a melodic song at 180 bpm, I know it's not perfect yet, but that's why I put it here to get some feedback.
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Comments
Anonymous [be] - 15 years ago
Still good work! Keep it up
Grts
Skip [be] - 15 years ago
ah, nice :)) the little one comin' in.
sweet mood ,love it.
at 02:08 I would put the breaks (not the 4/4 kick) more upfront, so that the whole thing would break loose some more...
real nice even if some experience is still needed.
also to try;the shakers that play together with the 4/4kick;I would try like this;" kick shaker kick shaker,instead of the 2 together.
At the verry first melody,you play 2 notes together the 2nd,3rd and 4th notes are just the same but in different "maat"(high and low?) ,I would try to use those low notes for even more harmony by using thel differently (not super nescessary)
Besides that;alot of potential with good ideas.
greets!
StorungStelle [be] - 15 years ago
happy and good idm trackske.
Rag [be] - 15 years ago
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Foxn [be] - 15 years ago
but i really like the song.
big up wi
OforOdetta [be] - 15 years ago
kzou just nog wa prutsen aan tgeluid van da jungleke ( vooral in tbegin) but i enjoyed this song, yes