Electrobel

good foundation for a song. But indeed there is deff a need for more elements
Also the mix & soundquality isn't all that...

work on it!
thmub up^^

what it made me think of:
gameboykingdom in a period just before an all destroying war or something. interpretating this as a whole bunch of gameboycharacters peparing for their last stand...

what coudl be improved:
maybe make intro a bit longer with a drop of drums for half a measure, a measure none, again...
also i think more countermelodies are needed. to live up the nervousity. a unique sample her or there (unique meaning only once in the song) like a the grab coin sounds from mario land (songs over, still in gameboy land, help, me want out). an acidline is allways fun, but beware you don't make this too similar to eatable tunes (unless that's the point, with the similar title and stuff)
if it was me, i'd let hell break loose at the last 30sec or something. it really is something i'd expect to happen whit this kind of nerve wrekking tune. it really grinds my gear if the anticipated climax stays out, preparing for it all that time, and then you find yourself at the end, without a climax, rrrrzealy frustrating...
back to song:
never said this, but i enjoy the pads in your songs, they kinda sound like cheap strings or so, but they help build that amazing athmosphere your songs have.
beats sound a bit to familiar to me, an unexpected sound in there could really light them up, dunno what i'm talking about, just seems that way to me at this point in time.
anyhow, khebbet al int snotje, da wordt weer een goedje ;)

ps, btw, that hell to break loose i was talking about doesn't necessarly needs to breakcore, which is easely assumed with my background ;)

Héhé,
Actually before I even red one word of the comment of ISKARIOT, I was thinking of the momment when a Massive Intergalactik Space Ship is preparing to a huge space War!

Maybe a 1:40 I would make the drop in more massive-> bigger bass? and more breaks and more sounds...

Nice Story

cool cool, great feedback guys, just what I needed.
agree on every point.
Will do some try-outs.
Its true, the technique and sort-of sound Ive used here for the beats is a technique I kinda used for the last 6 months,Its idd time for some evolution in that.
And I agree to make the beats towards the end harder,heavier and more wicked until the climax.
Also thought about one-timer samples,Ill check my files...disagree on the coin-grab sound, is overused imo ;)
Ill also try to make some spacey fight sounds,like an epic battle that end in a huge explosion; bigbang-styler.
Climax will be massive.
(now that I said it, ill have to make it true)
thanx again for listening and commenting,apreciate it.

yeah, needs some work, but I'm sure you'll be able to work it out. add more layers, put some more backgroundbeats in it, tralali tralala, maybe a climax yeah. I'm sure you'll figure it out all right.

héhé,
so I'm really looking foward for that big bang climaxx man! :D

ne goeien basis e,
en toch wel were wa last van afscheids gevoelens ze.
tis e goedje

very nice like the atmospere that the arrangement gives to the song :p i mean the combination of the bass and melodies, needs some more work indeed (climax and ending)
big up!

great comme d'habitude! needs indeed some more work but i'm allready very sure this will become another classic^^

listening on crappy speakerz, so judgment isnt clear, but, i love it, i totally recognise ur melo's, its more skip than u think...
except for some false notes and some missing climate/beat melody changes it was a nice listening imo

dik once again!

allthough i'm allways happy to welcome any change, i feel a little sad the chip-drill-melotunes come to an end, damn sure was a good listen everytime...
downloading this, turned out to be yet another bomb of a track ;)

now mash those new styles!

I thank thee.

theyll never really die , but I feel I reached my goal into my fast melo-drill target , I fear ill repeat myself too much.

although my alkaloid-remix will be a true skiptune version...to be continued

i like your acid melodies!
but le rèste je suis pas fan!

nice honest french comment there

great song, i really like the atmosphere and the skip vibe. There are some very fine melo's, very good elements and a lot of detail. i totaly like the outro, you should create a new song with that, or make it much longer
good track!

dik in orde alweer wa. einde is gelijk skelektro (skiptuned elektro), ook keer wijs om da in die sound te horen. kvind da goe da ge zegt van: nu tijd voor iets anders: da zijn woorden van nen artiest! respec' fo' tha skip en vnv represent op uwen live.

nice experiment ! last part could be used further more of zo. perhaps a lil slower the whole thing?

thanx man
slower? you mean faster :))
yes, alreaddy working with that last part on a new lill track.

makes me think of getting in my spaceship and get ready 2 leave 4 a long yourney, full of adventures... :) could use more drama!!!!