Electrobel

First, it is a good start, the base is favourable to the development of a very interesting atmosphere.
I do not find that the 'organ' sound in the first minute be unjustified, maybe that would better less smooth, more grain, dirtier, to change its texture registration and supplement the palette ? (just a suggestion hein!)
I think also that it would be necessary to let the piece breathe, indeed the continuous bass takes a little bit place, overflow on the other instruments, maybe if you cut this one sometimes in choosen moments ?
Concerning the sequencer part, you talk about 57'' ? I would leave it as that but I would play on the panoramic and in a displacement in the depth of the reverb. (just a small suggestion aussi ;))

A good start in any case, to continue urgently ! ; -)

thank you very much. very helpful! ^^

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maybe it's a bit too ' stainless steel '
a bit dirt & glitchyness could be welcome

btw never trow something away ...

what I do in such a case, is start from what you alreaddy have and try diferent approaches that you each save, so youll have different demo-versions of your track,youll soon see that one of the versions appeals more to you than the others...
I do that often, its a good technique for tracks that are hard to continiue on, and I usually know right away what to keep and what to throw away.

about the track ,Idd skip the firt minute and use the last part with the high reverbed synths as an introduction.Pretty cool vibe you have.
good luck

htx.... good advice!

salut Steve
verrrrrrrrrrrrrrry nice song ,
" änner net ze vill ,et as gut wéi et as"
Pol

a bit soft

This is what i like!
Deep and dark..

Keep it up!

Hey man, nice athmo, good work...
I like the "pling" sounds, the "end" could last longer, then I'd propose a "comeback" of the middle part with some more variations...
Anyway, make it longer and it's amb.., eh, sorry, cool!!!!

uhu

i like the bassline, but you are right the first minute organ is out of place, and you have no high sounds something that would make your ears say... aaghh i hate that noise but dont stop it please, or why not some blazers with arpegiattor instead ofthe simple organ?