Electrobel

Hey I wanted to put that voice sample in my first song :'(
That's all right, sounds good in yours...but still!! grrr :p
nice track

oeh very nice!! Trance is not my favourite, but with tracks like i enjoy it very much!

nice synth but melody is rather easy/cliché,

basdrum nees more drive
where's the basline?
i find somewhere some kind of subbassline that sounds' not right with the main melody..

hihatz/percution sounds like standard frootyloop samples..thatz not a good thing..

got en empty feeling all over the song.. a bassline could do a lot about that..

dont be offended by my comment this is just some things i think imho

just wanne help

Excellent main sequence!!!!!!!!!!!!! Really!
This song, I thing, deserves the best! As I usually say, you could also try to put a compressor on the kick and bring that kick to the front. The comments of bjornc are positive and constructive I think.
This is quiet good anyway!