Electrobel

the track is not bad
but maybe your track needs a granular synthesis in the beat 'ne korrel' like they say over here. There is a low-fi program on the net you might be interested in.

>www.buzzmachines.com the program is called buzz (it's freeware).That software has some weird synths in it, it's easy to use. you can record it and then use in your main program.

but i like the details in your track!
Greetz

well, i just finished working (don't bugg me 'bout it :)) ) and goin' straight home (for once :p) to give all of your comments a go
thanks everybody, very helpfull comments - appreciate it a lot

ow anneuhmz, elkhor ... don't underestimate yourself man _ ever!
;)

Cool, but I think that you might break the snare , kinda tchak tchak or tchak ting boom tchak... with one or two new sounds in da ritmix too. My stupid advice :)

Me likez! But a little bit variation (melodywise) wouldn't hurt I guess!
Hell...

You decide!!

enjoyed listening anyway!!

this is probably the worst song i ever heard on electrobel,nah just kidding(is that the destructif comment you had in mind? hehe) i like the basic idea of the song but think you could uplift the highhat kinda thing in volume and make some breaks with the snare(not just tak tak tak)also some more high is needed in the rythmic part in my opinion.i also don't see this song as finished when it comes to composition.it just comes and goes like a sirene on an ambulance(metaphores,never been good in 'm)i suggest a counterpart in the melody something that slaps the song into another direction and later pulls it back to the original tune with a slite difference to it.that's my opinion so if you had something different in mind...kill me

Not bad at all,hell it's even a good one :)

the thing i would do is put some subtle delay on the beats

i think that would finish it off...

I dig this one.
It's got a great atmosphere and that always does the trick for me.
It doesn't feel finished yet, but I've downloaded it nonetheless.
If I get some idea's for this one, I'll let you know.