Electrobel

ah finally some dnb :)

it's been a while. don't know why so little dnb composers here...

Anyway, about ya track.

a bit repetitive indeed ... No real drop. I'm not too sure about the structure either ... and most important .. where's the big fat bassline :P

i agree with zark but i like what i heard anyway, u still have work to do but this could be a fuckin kool track! keep on!^^

strange kicker you have,its no dnb feel at all;

like zark said,bazeline,,???

rollin breaks;it just diden't work for me

greetz

i know i've some work to really finish this one… as i 've send on many forums to have advices for the bassline… each things i've done didn't fit with the other part of the track so i let it like this sometimes and i'll re-work on it with another spirit ;) thanx for comments i know i've still work but i don't understand cestqui for who this isn't DnB… it will be…

he ment only the kick i think.it's not really je dat, seems that it needs more bass and ofcourse that bassline...you need it.i think the song has good potential but still is far from ready

Kick is indeed a bit strange, it sounds more like a rock music kick than dnb, and a bit to repetitive too, but there are some nice sounds in it!

Default samplepacks???
Reverbed lowtoms are a bit too loud ;-)
Too much chaos man, sorry
u gotta clean up yer sound a bit, makes it alot better ;-)

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few month afters i'll re-work this one and send it soon ;)