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OforOdetta - Vijfsprong

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a song about choices and standing still on crossroads ...
it gets interesting from the second minute or so ... just listen !! and tell me what you think plz !!

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Erophin [be] - 18 years ago

mmm a bit like a computergame soundtrack..i prefered ur previous workz. it's a bit neutral. Maybee a clipke wood make it complete. ;)
 

edith [be] - 18 years ago

yeah , it's a bit colder and cleaner. i see what you mean. feel free to make a clipke !! of ne rmx ;)
 

SuzyFlash [be] - 18 years ago

edith, U should put lyrics on it..., I think of lyrics as something very hard to make/integrate... but when they're there... I always say WAUW!...enfin, I am nothing but a prutser... so maybe u shouldn't take my advice.....but I live in your neighbourhood, and I might recognise ya... and convince you about the wonders of human shouts...
 

boy [be] - 18 years ago

nice n bleepy love it:)
 

Funky [be] - 18 years ago

Very nize melodic work!
 

vanpet [be] - 18 years ago

are you a girl or a robot?
 

edith [be] - 18 years ago

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edith [be] - 18 years ago

even if i were a robot ... it'd still be female ;)
 

ReftsidelighT [be] - 18 years ago

reminds me of some stuff from afx' classics album.. cool melo's and vibe and bleepkens.. beatvariation's also in it's place.. something cartoony 'bout this.. i like
 

supadupabenji [be] - 18 years ago

Nice expresion of what you described, more please...I think some singing wouldn´t be out of order too along my modest opinion...
 

Samizdat [be] - 18 years ago

hi there, yeah I was listening to ur track and then by asking if I liked it I pushed the wrong buttom ts ts ts, well now u know....and the track is realy nice ambienced, I could have a dreamy sleep by listening to this. Good job myssidith, see ya
 

edith [be] - 18 years ago

why tnx sweety ! ;)
 

DrGonzo [be] - 18 years ago

very nice...reminds me of aphex too :)
 

yenneman [be] - 18 years ago

Ohyeah, this is nice. Good variations...*quality level on Ebel rising again*

*...where did I leave that Super Nintendo...?*
 

HarryPoppins [be] - 18 years ago

hopping around with a smile on me face :))
 

Rabauw [be] - 18 years ago

Good synths, very reverbed but they sound adequate. Like the funny fx inbetween, it's difficult to hear them but they did make me smile :)

Let me ask you just one question: "it gets interesting from the second minute". Does that mean you're not satisfied with the opening yourself, or....?

I thought it was a smooth composition. Very well balanced, the synth-on-scream device between 2:15 & 2:30 felt out of place. Other than that I can't fault it.
 

edith [be] - 18 years ago

well yeah , i'm not too happy with the sound of the synth that pops in right after the 'intro' (and the beat aswell ) i tried making it better... but i already got used to it like this so everything i tried to change sounded even worse somehow. the guitarish synth that you say is not completely in it's place. I think it wouldn't sound detuned it if wasn't so 'mismastered' . I'm gonna work on it. tnx for the tips ;)
 

eckhart [be] - 18 years ago

waw totally amazed by your ideas !!!!!
more !!!!!! ;)
 

agathokless [be] - 18 years ago

hey, you're right,
you get a lot of comments
...
i should change my name
to
avegotaklitoris
or sumthin'
...
=o°
:)

btw, nice work
like the sounds you use
only one thingie that bothers me
and that's that constant 4-4 beat
... drives me completely bezerk

 

rantferox [be] - 18 years ago

wahhahahaha
E. you're a pimp ;)

on topic: nice parts, quite subtle melodies. keep it up
 

edith [be] - 18 years ago

;)
 

MucH [be] - 18 years ago

Respect miss, just have to say this! :o

Going listen to your others stuff b/c love this one ;p
 

Doorchaser [be] - 18 years ago

Well. ..

I don't like the 4/4 beat either. I think you could've gone further with that and make it more interesting.

The intro is good (don't see what's wrong with it) In fact it ....

... Have you ever heard PLaid or The Black Dog (Productions). If not I think you should. Because i find here melodywise exactly the same thing.

And I'm a huge Plaid - Black Dog fan
 

edith [be] - 18 years ago

:) yess me too !! there are my absoluuuuute favorite !!! yeah well ,wauw what a compliment what can i say . you made a gal's day :)

about the simple 4/4 beat . you're probably right. beats aren't my 'speciality' really. i get bored making them quite fast. i mostly make my beats when i wish i had inspiration :) but don't.. that might be the catch. guess now i'm just too tired of these songs to start working on again :)
 

Akwalek [be] - 18 years ago

well , for me the structures make it all up for the drums.even the 4/4 make me move...
and indeed add some nice cutted voiced, they would go nice on this...
 

melodikpinpon [be] - 18 years ago

at the beginning I was afraid, but quickly, I have to like...nikkel work
:)
very nice hi hats...
 

icteder [be] - 18 years ago

first time i heard this i was not very much impressed.it was at reftsidelights house and i only heard it quikly . it sounded a little to clean for my goesting but after second listening i must say it's a very very nice composition.thumbs up
 

kaoz [be] - 18 years ago

standing still on crossroadz soundz kinda dramatic, but i think this song givez a very positive punch...
could be a soundtrack 4 a happy cartoon, like Erophin sayz, i keep having flashbackz of commodore64 & atari gamez like Lotus Turbo... perfect soundtrack to depart on a holiday...
 

Salamadictus [be] - 18 years ago

afx style inderdeed!
 

theMinibot [be] - 18 years ago

it's super chouette,your sounds are very cool.your song make me a little think of Element of sci-fi :) sinon j'aime vraiment bien les passages avec les melodie qui font jeux video,je réecoute tout ltemp cpassage :)
 

Spacebug [be] - 18 years ago

Cool sounds , i like ur style..
 

brandtkalk [be] - 18 years ago

good devlopement, need vocoded voice or something like , but it just my adviz!
 

edith [be] - 18 years ago

thank u all for the beautifull words &advises. u know they are always welcome ,and yezz a microphone would also be welcome ! :)although i don't have lyrics for this one precisely
 

theMinibot [be] - 17 years ago

it's pas grave,pas besoin de lyrics super developed,look pinpon et minibot,lol,don't even need to savoir chanter :p
 

PlanetsCitizens [be] - 17 years ago

Excellent mix! Nice mood.
 

amkrisis [be] - 17 years ago

klinkt goed!
 

Rapestation [be] - 17 years ago

Damn, this is really really really good. Fantastic melodies, this track is finished!
 

edith [be] - 17 years ago

:)
 

yaka [be] - 17 years ago

I like those little dwarvetunes .. allrighty
!!!
 

Jemenfish [be] - 17 years ago

Have to agree, it's a 'finished' track, the mix is perfectly well done, and quite original approach too...thumbs up
 

RoachBugincan [be] - 17 years ago

damn...see now pass that I nooit left a komment op dees lieke...wel bij deze...prachtige song...but what else is new
 

S-cape [be] - 17 years ago

nice harmony ! really just as i like ! a pretty cool travel ^^
 

HarryPoppins [be] - 17 years ago

ja deees ist! this is really goe :)
the melody is supercatchy, and the hopping steady rythm sprrekt mi wel aan
goood song very yes!
 

Microlek [be] - 17 years ago

makes me happy all the way on this schraal namiddagske...VOICES PLZ....this would be a bomb...ready to take over the dance-forrest...
 

dlo [be] - 17 years ago

Very nice song indeed I would have been hopping around if my back didn't hurt
 

eckhart [be] - 17 years ago

DIT HEERST
 

Stakha [be] - 17 years ago

i like the acid first sound with the lfo filter. these resonants sound make me thrill.
for me it's interesting all the time. good compo. greets
 

edith [be] - 17 years ago

tnx for all the comments stakha ...im really glad u like it :)

tnx again everyone else :)
 

sapajoucoaster [be] - 17 years ago

yes, very good, thumb up!
 

Anonymous [be] - 17 years ago

mega goe bezig!! fruity guru! funky space invaders . . .

pater bram



 

jelle [be] - 17 years ago

heb je muziek leren kennen vorige week via david en kmoe zeggen, tis de max!
echt super, bezig blijven!
 

tumc [be] - 17 years ago

very µ-siq and plaid-ish, like the glitching clickers and melodic blips and blops clean sound, good work!
 
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